| "Onimusha Ranma" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: GrayPheonix [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2007 18:26 CST
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Crap, I guess I didn't review this one when I read it a few months back. Okay, only downside to this fic is...IT IS INCOMPLETE!!!! Please update, this story so far RULES! I am a giant fan of the Onimusha series (and I get scared by the resident evil series, quite a bit) so I love the survival horror shit. Still, I'd love to see this story completed. Anyway, please update here, this story is worth finishing. Ja ne.
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Title: funfun
Reviewed By: Takumi Fugiwara [MediaMiner Member] On: July 24, 2005 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is really good, but i think that the story needs a little break from all of the fighting itis getting very tiresome.
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Reviewed By: iatnehofimak [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 21:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great plot..and fight scene...and plz update soon
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: September 06, 2004 02:53 CDT
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Great chapter
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Title: Chapter the 4th
Reviewed By: Gnomy On: August 29, 2004 11:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story quite good, looking forward to seeing where you go with this. You might want to change the rating though, that sex scene would earn at least an R rating, possibly NC-17.
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Reviewed By: an author On: August 28, 2004 22:15 CDT
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interesting chapter. however there are a lot of mispellings in there. one ranma's mothers name is spelt NODOKA not NADOKA. furthermore Ukyou is not spelt that way it is spelt UKYO no U at the end of her name. also you spelt SUON wrong it is spelt SOUN. if you need spelling checks then go here. http://www.wot-club.org.uk/RanmaFAQ/ this place has almost all the proper spellings and such for characters. finally your writing prose is crappy. you continually switch between present and past tense writing prose and that is WRONG. stick to past tense writing prose when doing descriptions. lastly your story is more based on conversation then actual description and makes for bad reading. please fix that.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: August 28, 2004 17:11 CDT
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Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: xx On: August 15, 2004 18:45 CDT
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Great story Make it a Ranma / Ceres or a Ranma / Claire couple
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Reviewed By: Mr. Chinchilla On: August 03, 2004 22:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story is good and I hope you write at faster pace but, I think your missing a few weapons, unless your only using weapons from Onimusha Warlords, so i'll list the ones I know of, which is Warlords(2) and Demon Siege(3) Normal Sword (Katana) Tensoujin (Sky) Kuugatou (Air) Chigouhu (Earth) Raizan (Lightning ) check Enryuu (Fire ) check Shippuu (Wind) check Bishamon Sword (Dark) I think you mentioned this Bow w/Normal, Fire, Ice, Lightning Arrows note that Sannosuke had a lil time traveling experience so he should of had those 'pearls' too.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: August 03, 2004 18:29 CDT
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Cool chapter. I hope you don't let the lack of reviews discourage you.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: July 26, 2004 16:53 CDT
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Great chapter.
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Reviewed By: Gopu On: July 16, 2004 16:47 CDT
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Look forward to reading more.
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