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Title: *twitches*
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 13, 2005 19:15 EDT
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Ember, you have outdone yourself again. I like how it goes into the martial arts on Vegeta-sei and Vegeta teaching Bura techniques even Trunks doesnt know. An all around awesome fic; Please don't keep up in suspense too long. That was an evil cliff-hanger, I must know the rest. *twitches* Bura PS-I have been a fan of yours for years now and I still love seeing new art or fics from you.
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Reviewed By: K On: April 12, 2005 01:23 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG she knows...but what the heck does she know?! ugh! you betta update darnit, i cant believe you left us hangin there. lol evil cliffy. but i cant wait to know. update soon pls !!!! What the f does that b*tch know?!?!?!?!!?!?!?? AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!
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Title: Interesting!
Reviewed By: autumn [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2005 01:18 EDT
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I just started reading this story, and I blew through all four chapters in one sitting. As usual, your writing style is impeccable. I think you've done a great job exploring Vegeta & Bra's relationship. I love seeing Vegeta being a Dad, spying and all. It's sweet. Now, I'm VERY interested in what is going to happen at the performance!! Whatever it is, that girl has it coming to her! And what is Bra's secret?? Hmmmm.... Looking forward to the next chapter.
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Reviewed By: butterflyV On: March 26, 2005 19:45 EST
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I've noticed this story emerging on FF.NET. Is it your doing or is someone trying to do a "Hercule" on you and taking your idea.
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 00:46 EST
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She knows?? What does she know!? ack!!! *falls over* Please update soon before I lose my mind!!! =)
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Reviewed By: HolyAlmost On: March 13, 2005 13:27 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've read this story so many times allready. Its just awesome and I can't wait to see where its heading. Keep up the great work!
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Reviewed By: Frabs! ^.^! On: March 10, 2005 15:19 EST
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WHAT DOES SHE KNOW???? Oh man, please update soon! ~Frabs! ^.^!
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 19:43 EST
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Lol...I almost forgot! HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!! (I saw it on a forum!)
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Reviewed By: Gohans_Onna [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2005 19:41 EST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG what does she know?! It could be so many things! I AM DYING...PLEASE UPDATE FAST!!!!!!!
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Title: dancing- Pt. four
Reviewed By: turleskoi On: March 05, 2005 13:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh No! I'm totally hooked on this, you have to continue soon, please... I love the relationship you've developed between Vegeta and Bra.
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Title: dancing, ch one
Reviewed By: dragonzmoon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 09:33 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How cute! I've never read where vegeta teaches Bra ki control. Your ingenuity is exceptional!
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Reviewed By: Evelyn (Vegge's Mate) On: March 05, 2005 00:47 EST
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Wow! I really love this chapter! It's your best yet! I love how it flows and moves along at a nice pace. It's very exciting! I can't wait to see what you have planned next. Keep up the excellent work!
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Reviewed By: dbzfanjess On: March 04, 2005 23:26 EST
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hey great job... I loved the chapter... and can't wait to find out more about this girl and how vegeta will make her pay... nice
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Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 21:29 EST
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I'd forgotten how much I love this story. This territory is so fascinating to me--Vegeta IC negotiating this bizarre post-Buu family life. All the Heathers--LOL!!! I laughed out loud. Thanks for it. I thought the dialogue (always hard for me too) was great.
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2005 06:22 EST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely cannot wait for Vegeta to get his hands on those brats! I'm dying of curiosity to find out what that secret is!! The way you portray Vegeta teaching Bra martial arts is spectacular. *grinz wildly* It's so sweet! Please update it soon!!!!
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