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Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 21:40 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, you managed to keep them perfectly in character. The thing I have always loved most about your writing is how well you can make Vegeta, well Vegeta and still show his emotions. This is a wonderful portrayl of his relationship with Bra.
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Reviewed By: MommyRogers [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 19:18 EDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sweet, sensitive, and well written ^_^
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Reviewed By: Snazzy On: July 27, 2004 14:03 EDT
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This really is a fun fic. And about the whole IC thing, debbiechan is right: you're the one that knows Vegeta best, so don't worry about those sort of things =). So...great job ^_^
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Title: one more thing
Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 09:29 EDT
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dangety, I forgot to add one more gushing thing (as if mm.org would let me as long as my review was already going!) But it's truly marvelous how you managed to work in information and drama about characters not even in the scene (Kakkarot, Chi Chi, even Trunks). This is a masterful piece, and it's already an absolute favorite. debbiechan
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Title: an answer to a wish!
Reviewed By: debbiechan maybe logged in? [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2004 09:23 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh Ember, you really cheered me up this morning! What a marvel of a story. You know I'm a sucker for post-Buu and I've been wishing on many a star that writers of your caliber would do a Vegeta with Bra fic, and looky here, right out of the blue--this lovely piece! And only you could write it, given your knowledge of martial arts. The narrative is clear as water, and the insights are new. IC doesn't mean so much when you explore this new territory--there's not much IC to reference from other fics! But you know Vegeta better than anyone and look at this--! This must be what it feels like to have summoned the dragon and gotten your heart's desire! A lovely one-shot! I'm so glad!!!!!
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Title: Dancing
Reviewed By: Anita Dick On: July 27, 2004 09:21 EDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I swear, I've read so many fics thru the years but I've never read one that made me want to check my breathing till now ^_^. I like where you're going with this and I'm looking forward to reading more about Bra's progress. Good job! ^_~
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