| "Hurt by Neglect" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: silver unicorn [MediaMiner Member] On: December 01, 2004 01:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please write more on this story. it's really good and I think you could make some more chapters. like were trunks go's and if vegeta go's to find him and if he tell's trunks he is loved by them. please think about it. ^-^
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Reviewed By: yuikey On: August 10, 2004 20:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this story is great ! Please update soon!!!
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