| "Fragment of Eternity" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart212 On: June 15, 2005 22:44 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story very much. I am glad you didn't make Kagome kill herself. This story made me sad and made me laugh all at once. I hope you continue to write. ^_^
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Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2005 02:33 CDT
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I've read god knows how many of these stories. But i can count on one hand those that actually made me feel close to the point of crying that i had to take breaks just becouse i refuse to cry. I'm happy to say that your story numbers among those
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Reviewed By: DanniEllie On: March 24, 2005 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't think that i've honestly ever read a fanfiction so beautiful in my entire life. I read from beginning to end, I cried so much dureing the last few chapters that i'm now sporting fine dark circles and a puffy little pockets around my eyes. You my dear are the kind of writter that can honestly stop my heart... Where have you been all my life! Its presently..almost 3am, so i'm heading off to bed, but praise be that I found this fic, and I can't wait to read any thing else by you, It will deffinatly be as wonderful...and dare I say magical? Thanx for this fiction, JA
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Title: Ahaha, Math O-o
Reviewed By: Lilac ^_~ On: February 03, 2005 21:18 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
"Don't even SPEAK of that subject," Kagome warned, glaring at her friend with baggy, sleep-deprived eyes. "I was up all night finishing it and I HATE math. DESPISE it. LOATH it with a PASSION. Wish with every FIBER of my BEING that it would BURN FOR ETERNITY in the FLAMING PITS OF HELL." ~ Kagome o_o My thoughts exactly.... now what chapter was that on? 10 I think..... heh, no matter o_o; I just was typing to say: ~Deep exaggerated breath~ I LURVEEEE IT! 0_0 ~spazz~ o_o; Buwahaha, it so much fuunnn! ^_^ ~squeals like an insane fangirl.... which I actually am~ o_0
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Reviewed By: Inuyashas_Miko On: January 17, 2005 03:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WOW...I loved it. This is such a wonderful story. There should be more reviews...kinda annoys me and I didn't even write this story. Anyway, I really enjoyed your story and apprecaite(Spelling) the time you took to write it...it was beautiful, and sad, and so happy. I cried...alot. Well, anyway GREAT JOB! *Gives 2 thumbs up...If I had another thumb I'd give you 3, but I'm only human, oh well*
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Reviewed By: Clawfang On: November 27, 2004 12:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! Great story! You deserve more reviews, though.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Ke'chara On: October 31, 2004 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was amazing. I loved the last chapter so much. I swear I was fighting tears. As a suggestion, I think it would have been better if you left the part where she reunites with Inu off. It would have made it better if u would have just stopped at her knowing that she would be with him sooner than she thought. anyways, i really do love that. this is the only review i have written for any fanfic so u know ur good girl. if ur other ones r this gurl, u best believe i'm gonna check em out. ... gosh that was wonderful. I have this feeling stuck in my throat from trying to stop myself from crying. i would love to hear from u. a_street87@sbcglobal.net
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Title: Chapter twenty-three
Reviewed By: Black-Moon-Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 01:44 CDT
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*snivle* I hated imagining her old. *shudder* But I liked the rest. People on MM.org do NOT apriciate good talent! TEN (not including my three. . . -_-;;; Sorry didn't reveiw more) REVEIWS!!!!!!! That's mad! You deserve A LOT more for this.
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Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: Black-Moon-Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 23:15 CDT
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*slams fist on the table* DAMNIT! You're so mean! I was SOOO wanting someone to commit suicide (though I STRONGLY dissagree with it in real life, STRONGLY)! But. . . I love this anyway. ^_^ I've never doubted you before, and you've always ended it happily. . .so. . . Go get e'm? ^_^;;;;;
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Title: Chapter One
Reviewed By: Black-Moon-Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PERFECT!!! (Me. . . again. -_-) Couldn't resist I heard that you were doing something-or-other with this story and I thought I should FINALLY read it! And it's great. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Litwolf689 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just have to add in another review to say how much I loved this story! I just read the last chapter, just for the heck of it, and my throat clogged up and my eyes got watery! Damn, you really do know how to write a good story! Please keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: Chocobo Of Faded Memories [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 13:13 CDT
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Oh...as I forgot in my last review, I cried at the end!!! This was soooooooooooooooooo sappy!!! Kawaii!!!!!!! Well, ja ne again!~ =^. .^=
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Reviewed By: Chocobo Of Faded Memories [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is AnonymousKitsune from Fanfiction.net. I miss you and I'm sure all of the ppl on ff.net miss you too!! This story was great!!!!!! I don't know which I like better, Early December or this one!! Hey, did you know that Early December on ff.net is gone? I can't find it...(sniff) Well, anyway, write more stories, onegai!!!!!!!!! ja ne!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tsuki_no_oni [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 19:17 CDT
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwa! that was so cute! i loved it! i had to stop in the middle so I wouldn't die of exhaustion at school, and I drew a fanart! ^.^ it was SOOOOOOOOOOO kawaii! ^.^ you're a really great author ^.^
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Reviewed By: sadia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 19:10 CDT
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I followed the link from the Fanfic Elimination site. Both of ours are possible nominees, and yours looked interesting. I've only read the first chapter, but it has a nice style to it, and some good ideas. The beginning reminds me a bit of "Bottled Genius" by rozefire..but that's jsut the beginning...so i'll go read more and see how your story develops!! great work! Good Luck on Elimination.
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