| "Fragment of Eternity" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Clawfang On: November 27, 2004 12:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Whoa! Great story! You deserve more reviews, though.
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Title: Wow
Reviewed By: Ke'chara On: October 31, 2004 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was amazing. I loved the last chapter so much. I swear I was fighting tears. As a suggestion, I think it would have been better if you left the part where she reunites with Inu off. It would have made it better if u would have just stopped at her knowing that she would be with him sooner than she thought. anyways, i really do love that. this is the only review i have written for any fanfic so u know ur good girl. if ur other ones r this gurl, u best believe i'm gonna check em out. ... gosh that was wonderful. I have this feeling stuck in my throat from trying to stop myself from crying. i would love to hear from u. a_street87@sbcglobal.net
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Title: Chapter twenty-three
Reviewed By: Black-Moon-Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2004 01:44 CDT
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*snivle* I hated imagining her old. *shudder* But I liked the rest. People on MM.org do NOT apriciate good talent! TEN (not including my three. . . -_-;;; Sorry didn't reveiw more) REVEIWS!!!!!!! That's mad! You deserve A LOT more for this.
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Title: Chapter 20
Reviewed By: Black-Moon-Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 09, 2004 23:15 CDT
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*slams fist on the table* DAMNIT! You're so mean! I was SOOO wanting someone to commit suicide (though I STRONGLY dissagree with it in real life, STRONGLY)! But. . . I love this anyway. ^_^ I've never doubted you before, and you've always ended it happily. . .so. . . Go get e'm? ^_^;;;;;
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Title: Chapter One
Reviewed By: Black-Moon-Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: September 08, 2004 16:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PERFECT!!! (Me. . . again. -_-) Couldn't resist I heard that you were doing something-or-other with this story and I thought I should FINALLY read it! And it's great. ^_^
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Reviewed By: Litwolf689 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2004 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just have to add in another review to say how much I loved this story! I just read the last chapter, just for the heck of it, and my throat clogged up and my eyes got watery! Damn, you really do know how to write a good story! Please keep on writing!
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Reviewed By: Chocobo Of Faded Memories [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 13:13 CDT
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Oh...as I forgot in my last review, I cried at the end!!! This was soooooooooooooooooo sappy!!! Kawaii!!!!!!! Well, ja ne again!~ =^. .^=
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Reviewed By: Chocobo Of Faded Memories [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2004 13:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, this is AnonymousKitsune from Fanfiction.net. I miss you and I'm sure all of the ppl on ff.net miss you too!! This story was great!!!!!! I don't know which I like better, Early December or this one!! Hey, did you know that Early December on ff.net is gone? I can't find it...(sniff) Well, anyway, write more stories, onegai!!!!!!!!! ja ne!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: tsuki_no_oni [MediaMiner Member] On: September 02, 2004 19:17 CDT
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwa! that was so cute! i loved it! i had to stop in the middle so I wouldn't die of exhaustion at school, and I drew a fanart! ^.^ it was SOOOOOOOOOOO kawaii! ^.^ you're a really great author ^.^
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Reviewed By: sadia [MediaMiner Member] On: August 30, 2004 19:10 CDT
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I followed the link from the Fanfic Elimination site. Both of ours are possible nominees, and yours looked interesting. I've only read the first chapter, but it has a nice style to it, and some good ideas. The beginning reminds me a bit of "Bottled Genius" by rozefire..but that's jsut the beginning...so i'll go read more and see how your story develops!! great work! Good Luck on Elimination.
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Reviewed By: Hellkeeper [MediaMiner Member] On: August 27, 2004 20:00 CDT
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damn it i am cryin..... this is y u are my favorite fanfiction author :)
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Reviewed By: Litwolf689 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 11:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sad, but so good! Always a bunch of twists and turns! Please write more soon! Thanks!
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Reviewed By: saccharine-ish [MediaMiner Member] On: August 19, 2004 21:35 CDT
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AHHHH! love it! everyone of yer fics that i have read ive loved! gah! your so good!
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what a wonderful story! and i love that josh groban song! he's my absolutely favorite singer in the word (have you listened to closer? i love never let go) and yet again, i was reminded again of Druidh's picture "Fading Memories" you know? i bet you did that on purpose, didn't you? or have you seen the picture? please email me back at hanyou_elf@sailormoon.com i love your story and i loved your writing style! great job! (and i noticed that i was the first reviewer! *happy dancing*) great story! ja ne! ~hanyou-elf
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Reviewed By: moonhanyou [MediaMiner Member] On: August 16, 2004 12:39 CDT
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okay, first of all, i love this story, i love this story sooo much! second of all, this chapter raised a few questions in my mind. i just wanted to know if you saw the picture that Druidh drew, "Fading Memories"? this chapter reminded me of that picture. was this chapter based off the picture or the picture based off of this chapter? please email me and let me know! please! also, i loved the imitation fluff at the beginning of this chapter, i couldn't help laughing my ass off. it was a much needed relief from all the seriousness in the story. and just for spite: is this in inu/kag story? (hee, hee) fourteen chapters in and if i haven't gotten it, than i am a hella-baka, ne?
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