| "Last To Know" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Midnight Raven - [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 18:55 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes,please update soon. The story is very amazeing.I have nothing eles to say,but please Update.
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Reviewed By: iowa chic On: August 22, 2004 01:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is great! Is your next chapter going to be about Kagome in England and Sesshomaru in Japan, or when Kagome goes back to Japan? Well I guess there is no other way for me to find out unless you write another chapter! *wink* *wink* Plz update asap! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Aitu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 12:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, yes. Love the story so far! So how long will Kagome be gone and what will she do while she's gone and how will she change and who will she hook up with and when will Sesshoumaru realize that he's an asshole and don't I ask a lot of questions? hehehe. Let's see, what else. I love what you have going on for the story so far but if you would allow me to add one bit of constructive critisism-- I think that if you drew the scenes out a little bit longer that are between Sess and Kag so we can see a little bit more into their feelings. Not like paragraph after paragraph of description but just enough and not too much? Does that make sense? I'm starting to confuse my self, hehe. But hey, maybe I shouldn't even be saying anything because it's only the first chapter and all.But I guess when I write I like to have a few suggestions so maybe you do too? So once again, great start to your story; it'll be added to the favorites list soon! Make more chapters soon please ---Aitu
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Reviewed By: Tsukiyo_Kitsune_tears [MediaMiner Member] On: August 05, 2004 11:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOO, nice story!!! update really really soon!!!!^___~
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