| "5G's" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] |
Title: wooooo man
Reviewed By: Sapling On: August 13, 2004 14:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 5 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the concept but the wording could have a little more feeling. a tiny bit more discription but don't over due it just cause i said. It sounds good and nice cliff hanger!
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Reviewed By: Bri/Koolaid On: August 11, 2004 01:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like it. I think you should make it a bit longer though, and spell check or something. Otherwise I really like it.
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Reviewed By: Chris(pyro) On: August 10, 2004 22:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story, u should like make it longer, like more chapters :) its good, like it sounds like an episode ~chris
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