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Reviewed By: goofy_goober [MediaMiner Member] On: May 10, 2008 02:39 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this was really good.. i loved that you did it from kagomes point of view and not everyone else's like so many other stories do.. it had its own uniqueness that way... great job.. i really enjoyed it!!!
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Reviewed By: Ro0tin4Kagome [MediaMiner Member] On: July 30, 2007 15:45 CDT
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OKay let me just say where you left the smut part out.. I have endless possibilities of what they did. Can you please save me here buddy. See I cant see how much they actually feel for each other if I cant see what type of sex they had. lol Just the way my perv mind works.
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Reviewed By: Catticus On: April 29, 2006 00:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was reccomended this story on the forums by someone i forget the name of. i'm very glad i read it though! it is a sweet romance, and it portrayed the characters well, maybe not in the strictly canon way, but their personalities are well developed. Not one usually to go for romances, this caught my eye and gave me a "snuggly" feeling that i usually associated with cuddling, and it has turned a tiring night into a restful night. the sex scenes (more like, lack thereof) were tasteful, except for the first chapter. you may want to edited the "ass into his crotch" sentence slightly to improve the story overall. i'm a picky grammar person, and i can say that your spelling and grammar were very good. do go over your chapters though to correct misspelled words and words that say "correct" to your Word Processor but don't make sense to the story. one way to catch these words is to read each chapter backwards before posting. one spelling mistake you should particularly look for is "loose" and its forms. "Loose", as you have used it, ("you can loose yourself in this place") is actually spelled "lose". "Loose" means "the knot is loose on the rope". "Lose" means to "lose my umbrella" I have seen many a friend and many a writer do this, you're not alone.
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Reviewed By: dudekiller(nsi) On: April 20, 2006 21:44 CDT
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i really like this story, though it almost made me cry a few times...but that could just come from the fact that i think i'm a wuss. i liked it all the same. great job.
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Title: i luv this story
Reviewed By: inuyashalover777 On: April 18, 2006 02:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this this fanfick it was so beautiful **sniff** **sniff** this is my first time writting a review so u had better b happy because i give this a 100/10
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Reviewed By: inuyashalover777 On: April 18, 2006 02:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved this this fanfick it was so beautiful **sniff** **sniff** this is my first time writting a review so u had better b happy because i give this a 100/10
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Reviewed By: KennaS [MediaMiner Member] On: September 07, 2005 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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I saw this recomended in the Beta thread about How not to write a crapy Inuyasha fic. It came highly recomended and I must say that Im glad I read this. I normaly dont care for fics that start right in with sex, but this was done tastefully. Im going to keep this in my favorites section so that I can #1 Keep it as a refrence for a guide to a well written story and 2, to share it with others. Thank you for writing this and proving to me that there are intelligent Inuyasha fans out there.
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Title: Excellent
Reviewed By: Kiwichan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well...I read this a while ago and now I am reveiwing it...I tend to do that :(...anyway, excellent story! I thought your style was unique..the idea, I have definatly seen before, but you took it and you made it your own! I love it when a writer does that. It shows people that even though certain things have been done before, you can still take it, and tweak it, and make it unique and different! Keep up the excellent writing and I definatly look foreward to more of your stories!
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Reviewed By: Iggy Lovechild [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2004 15:50 CDT
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Well,well, I usually hate AUs, but this one just sucked me in...maybe because I could relate to it, maybe because you kept everyone pretty in-character. But anyway, I commend you! You've taught me that not all AUs are evil (just 95% of them LOL).
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Reviewed By: DemonKirara00 (not logged in) [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 23:44 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
had to review again!! i loved it!!! -huggles- great job!
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Title: Starfire27
Reviewed By: Starfire27 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 25, 2004 17:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow that was an amazing story. The drama and plot were very creative. I loved this story. You are a very good writer and I hope you make another fan fic soon because i already know i'll love it.
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Reviewed By: angelbabe17(not signed in) On: August 24, 2004 10:57 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it! great work!
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Title: hehe
Reviewed By: cute_kag On: August 24, 2004 06:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i loved it. great story of indecisiveness ( is that even a word?) and confusion. anyway hope you write other incredible stories :)
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Reviewed By: Anata [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 02:08 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
To begin with, thank you. This story was absolutely wonderful. I could see the hard work, detail, devotion, character, and the inevitable part of you that went into this. When all of those things combine in a piece of art, for indeed this is art, everything seems to fall into place; everything feels natural; above all, everything is incredible. I could believe this story. The characters, they weren't a story; they weren't words; they were real people. You have captured the human pshyche and all-around soul (for lack of a better term) in words and sentences. I almost felt like I could actually see the characters, like, if I reached out, I would be able to touch them. I don't know how to explain it, but...do you know that feeling you get when you've read a really incredible piece of literature? That is what I'm feeling right now. It's almost like...satisfaction. The reason for the 9 in spelling and grammar was that there were a few times when a word would be missing or a typo was made. It didn't really detract from the story, but it was noticeable. A big round of applause to you for this.
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Title: Nice!
Reviewed By: Kikyou Priestess [MediaMiner Member] On: August 23, 2004 10:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I´ll never understand mediaminer and this shit... -_- Anyways, I loved! Ice cream huh? I´m wondering what Kagome imagined XD Very nice, you´re such a perfect writer!
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