| "Sacrificial Bride" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Title: Sacrificial Bride
Reviewed By: shadow_of_the_shades [MediaMiner Member] On: September 30, 2005 00:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very believable. I give you two thumbs up. Both of the characters were in character the whole time and...THEY HAD SEX WHEN THEY WERE MARRIED!!! I give you 20 extra points for that. I get tired seeing all these stories where Tohru gets raped and drunk and "in the moment". SHE'S AN INNOCENT FLOWER WHO'D WANT A WEDDING FIRST!!...or at least that's what I think. I thought that it was very suitable for Tohru to know about sex and such by now. I hate it when they have her so clueless. GREAT JOB! Keep it up!! Tchao!
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Reviewed By: me On: June 04, 2005 23:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
very good very wats a good word real i gues every one was in character exxspecialy tohru and akito but i hope you write a sequal i realy do
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Reviewed By: Mewling On: May 07, 2005 20:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ahhh! Excellent! Well written, and sexual without being smutty. I feel so sorry for Yuki and Kyou! I'm very impressed.
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Reviewed By: Kapitan Nemo On: November 27, 2004 02:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow...that was really titillating. And realistic, too. I hate the fics that make Tohru into a wanton slut, crying out "More!!" to her partner. You made her believable, and still innocently sexy. My favourite Furuba lemon, yet!
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Reviewed By: akuma_river [MediaMiner Member] On: August 17, 2004 10:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Cools Beans. I loved it. Keep up the great work.
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