| "Under Pressure" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: priscel--- On: February 20, 2005 23:58 CST
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hmm... Well the epi was good *cough* I'm glad that Heero and Duo got back together again and that Heero decided that Duo was really worth the effort. Cuz it seemed at first that he had just given up on finding Duo after he left and moved on... which is stupid! He should have put more effort into finding Duo. Hmm I know it's over but I had hoped that Duo would make Heero work to get them back together, heero said a lot more hurtful things than Duo. And you're right there is a difference between your writing style and that of your beta. *smiles and waves*
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Reviewed By: inulover16 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2005 01:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh man that was a good fic so far..i really love how good duo is at making pizza*wink*...any way that was really nice how u ended the last chap..I hope that u have written something other than this fic so that i can read it..ur a very good writter...anyway have a good day and ja ne^_^
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Reviewed By: priscel * On: October 16, 2004 05:42 CDT
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hmm well it sucks when lovers jump and make assumptions. Clearly Heero noticed that he was wrong when he accused Duo but his mistake was not saying that Wu Fei is his friend and nothing happen. He shouldn't have hit Duo, that wasn't necessary. If Duo meant anything to him he should have said bluntly like he always does what his relationship with Wuffers was and that would have simmer Duo down. Or atleast right after he slapped him said that instead of what he did say. I think that if Heero were the first to reach out to try an make things right then Duo woud have saw that he was wrong... I wonder what An will do when she sees Duo on the floor crying his eyes out? Maybe march out to Wuffers and yell at them and ask them what they did to Duo? Maybe this will make Heero worried enough to go check on Duo??! update soon!
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Reviewed By: camillian On: October 16, 2004 01:51 CDT
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i have to ask, did duo or heero ever ask zechs or wufei about what happened? oh well, update again soon!
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Reviewed By: Tygrrlyli578 On: October 15, 2004 21:28 CDT
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Isn't miscommunication the greatest? Gotta love it. You should write more now. This second, stop whatever else you're doing, like breathing and eating, and write more. Cause this fic is nifty. So there! ^_^
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: October 01, 2004 15:13 CDT
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I loved the story. Please do some more updating real soon.
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Title: us the wonder beta
Reviewed By: vegetachanlvoer On: August 20, 2004 22:20 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
...i hadn't realized you'd started posting this...didn't i tell you not to? or is that just my imagination...hmm...i dunno...oh well...well, i thought i might as well review for the pizzaria fic... love this fic...one of your best one's out there...one of your best of two that you've got out there...well, uhm...currently got out there? oh i dunno...i'm just really out of it...i mean, you've offically managed to milk nearly 4 reviews out of me...well, this is the 4th right now... uhm, i think that i like the fic. i'm having problems trying to point out what i wanna say... you know what i'm trying to say, right? i think/hope you do... luvies... sarah thing pillage a village us the beat who realized that you were doing something...and that that something was...spectacular
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Reviewed By: LEEMAX^_^ On: August 18, 2004 07:05 CDT
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I CAN'T WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER. PLEASE UPDATE SOON LIKE NOW.
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