| "Paradox" Reviews/Comments [ 233 ] |
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Reviewed By: LunaSlashSea [MediaMiner Member] On: October 09, 2010 10:48 CDT
Comment/Review:
Great story. Please write more
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Reviewed By: DancingAngels On: August 03, 2010 18:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is the fourth time I've read this story, and I absolutely love it. It is by far my favorite fan fiction I have ever read and quite possibly one of the best works of literature that I have come across. There are a few typos I noticed throughout the piece, but in-spite of that I still come back. I really want to know how it ends, and I'm obviously not the only one. I want to know how Hiei will react to Kagome's deal with Seshomaru, what the Jagan wants from her, and if Souta will be corrupted by Naraku. Please continue writing this story; we all want to know how it ends.
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Reviewed By: Black Rose Lady [MediaMiner Member] On: June 09, 2010 23:09 CDT
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Oh, goodness! I have been searching high and low for a good yyh/iy crossover! Some have great ideas for plot, others have good descriptions...but I think, I think in this story I may have found the whole package. Plot, description, character development (without going ooc), interesting interactions, and humor! Yay! I can't wait to read more, but I just had to tell you..."Woman. You have some explaining to do." is what I read, but all I heard was, "Luuuuucy! You got some 'splainin to doooo!" *dies* I'm sure someone else thought as much, but God, that was fantastic!
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Reviewed By: LuLuCraZeD [MediaMiner Member] On: July 27, 2009 01:05 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i simply LOVE this story!! i'm really hoping you continue this and update soon it's really good i wonder how hiei will react to kagome becoming sesshou's *shudders* pet it would be really sad if that does happen i mean they finally found happiness within each other even if hiei will never admit it... out loud or to any one else... yet at least well once the entire naraku stuff is over
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Title: what the hell?
Reviewed By: Extremelymadreader On: July 22, 2009 22:51 CDT
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That's it? You just left it there? REALLY? But....it was such a good story....
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Reviewed By: Kula [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2009 22:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a wonderful story, I'd love to see you continue it.
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: March 01, 2009 13:04 CST
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Congratulations! This fic is being featured as the March Fanfic of the Month at The Deadliest Sin, a Hiei/Kagome board. http://thedeadliestsin.proboards55.com/index.cgi
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Reviewed By: Jaisa Rael [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2008 09:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like the way you gave a summary of the yyh characters and the definitions of some of the yyh specific tearms. Your doing great. Two thumbs up. smiles
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Reviewed By: loretta537 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 10, 2008 03:52 CDT
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this is such a good story, please update it soon
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Reviewed By: condorfan [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2008 02:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story so far. I've read it before. Is it posted on Fanfic.net? Wendy
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Reviewed By: hiei_is_gorgeous On: April 08, 2008 08:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG this is such an amazing story!! :D I've read so many InuYasha fanfictions and apart from one called "the lucky ones" this is one of the very best that I have ever read!! ...but I'm a little down as its been well over 2 years since this story was updated :( ...could you please update it soon? I'm quite addicted to this story :) and I absolutly love the style that you right in-you are a brilliant writer!!
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Reviewed By: kendra On: March 16, 2008 22:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed the story and am sad to find the story abandoned i hope you finish the story. it was exciting and romantic and funny.
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Reviewed By: Obese_a_tron5000 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 16, 2007 23:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
uh......you can't leave it there!! omg. thats just so mean... but i really love this story! great work!
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Reviewed By: d_g On: July 27, 2007 11:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story! I really hope to see more of it some day. With most crossovers at least one character becomes glaringly OOC to make things work, yet you've got an excellent and entertaining storyline without loosing anyone's true identities. This is, without a doubt, a story that deserves to be finished.
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Reviewed By: fire_lily_fox [MediaMiner Member] On: May 20, 2007 19:33 CDT
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Are you going to update this b/c I would love to know how their relationship turns out. Are you going to abandon this story?
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Reviewed By: inuyasha_1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 09, 2007 17:59 CDT
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Please please please update and conitnue this story... I have read hundreds of stories looking for one like this, were no matter what the fearless heros can not win completely. I don't want to wait any longer to see how Hiei takes to Kagome offering herself to Sesshomaru as a pet in order to save his life. Perhaps there's something that he can do.. maybe a special mating ritual that will bind her completely to him? I don't know but I can't wait to find out! If you ever need anything then don't be a stranger.. Yours always, ~Mari-chan~
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Reviewed By: In2thedarkness On: January 22, 2007 02:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please update asap! I generally like kurkag more than Hiei/Kagome, but this is an exception. I really want to see what happens when Hiei finds out about Kagome's deal with Sesshoumaru, not only that but I want to see if Kurama gets into the story more, seeing as Hiei has a "bad feeling" about this whole Kurama teach Kagome thing. Please update asap! ^_~
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Title: wow...just wow
Reviewed By: Lil red On: December 30, 2006 16:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is proberly one of the most detailed and amazing fanfic's i have ever read, and trust me...ive read alot. i loved it so much, and i like it even more because its a hiei/kagome fic. Please do more, i cant wait to find out if Kagome goes with Sesshomaru as his...'pet' *shudders*
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2006 05:46 CST
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I've been re-reading this again. I just can't tell you how amazing this story is. Please come back and finish it!
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Reviewed By: madmiko [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2006 05:56 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one of my ALL-TIME FAVORITE stories! In your A?N from last year, you mentioned you pretty much had the next chapter done. I am begging you to continue the story!!! It's so incredibly well-written -- such a great plot-- so much Hiei/Kagome goodness!! This story deserves an ending! I just HAVE to know what happens after Naraku is defeated -- how will Kagome get away from Sesshoumaru? How will she and Hiei be able to be together if she doesn't? She HAS to tell him what she promised soon! How angry will he be? (How humbled will he be that she would do that for HIM? --Seems like it should really make him realize how much she loves him, right?) Will Kurama be able to help her with her powers? What will the outcome of THAT be? Will the Jagan do something BAD? Hiei's worried about it, but Kagome's not. What are Naraku's final plans for Souta? There's SO MUCH great story left to cover!! PLEASE pick this back up and finish it!!!
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Title: Good Work Going to Waste
Reviewed By: Vyncent [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2006 07:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is truly sad that such a well presented and plotted story has been abandoned. Please consider continuing this story. It is extremely good, and would be a total shame to not continue this fic.
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