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"Bargaining Death" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ]
 Reviewed By: Kagome_Warrior_Miko12 [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 01, 2005 01:51 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10
Comment/Review:
excellent story! i would give it 10s but i believe nothing is perfect, but your story comes pretty close! update soon!
 Reviewed By: kagomes_first_man  On: October 01, 2005 11:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
great story, very nice idea, you are very good at writting you should keep it up hope you update real soon.
 Reviewed By: kagomesfantasy  On: September 27, 2005 09:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
this is a really great story you have to uodate soon i have to know what happens i think this is a fantastic story you have here update soon!
 Title: EXCELLENT!!
Reviewed By: Noone2remember  On: June 06, 2005 23:55 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
your the best! the story is perfect i love come on please update very soon please
 Title: EXCELLENT!!
Reviewed By: Noone2remember  On: June 06, 2005 23:54 CDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
your the best! the story is perfect i love come on please update very soon please
 Reviewed By: InuLove  On: February 06, 2005 12:19 CST
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Please,PLEASE, continue!!!That's a great story. I want to know if Kagome will find out and if she will still lke InuYasha.
 Reviewed By: mikeslikb [MediaMiner Member]  On: November 11, 2004 13:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Well I want updates so Im definately reviewing! Please update!! I love this story!! I like the way you think, please check out my fic K&K: The Search For Two Brothers.
 Reviewed By: friscosub  On: September 20, 2004 14:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
i like your story i can't wait till you update
 Title: oopss sorry: real idea!
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 13:26 CDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is a very good story, and now ur stumped of how to move the story along so here is my idea: have kagome talk to miroku about how she felt for inuyasha before she found out he was death, then miroku should question her by saying "kagome, tell me, what does your heart say about inuyasha?" and kagome can reply "i love him, with all of my heart, even if he is death." then she should go home to find inuyasha waiting for her. inuyasha then tries to tell kagome how he loves her and how he could be with her, then kagome could get an idea; she could go into her attic and look for the family charm, the shikon no tama (jewel of 4 souls) and explains that the charm can be used by anyone with pure heart and it is supposed to grant a wish to whoever uses it. the story should write itself from that point. keep up the good work. shane.
 Title: i have n idea
Reviewed By: diablodude [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 19, 2004 13:19 CDT
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 Reviewed By: chickenlover2_nli  On: September 16, 2004 18:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
YAY! I like this story, even if it has shorter chappies than I'm used to...ANYWAYS, just as a side note thingy: Kagome's grandpa is very selfish.^-^
 Reviewed By: FataLFelineOfTheNight [MediaMiner Member]  On: September 08, 2004 19:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
very entertaining. reminds me a bit of that 1 movie a few yrs ago... meet joe black? sumting like that, newayz, luv it so im reviewin it so u update it. -^_^- ~*~Cat~*~

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