| "Second Thoughts" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Pink Poodle On: November 09, 2004 16:55 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
um...ok..tht wuz a little...odd? no offence, but what wuz with tht whole butterfly thing? & question. y doz she want the mark removed? ur not telling a lot in this stori. which sux. fill in the thingz. i wanna no y Kag wantz the mark removed. i wanna no y she wantz the s2pid butterfly! im not trying 2 insult u or anything, i jus want this stori 2 b better. Ja.
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Reviewed By: sutlesarcasm [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2004 02:46 CDT
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Make it look like a Butterfly? Where in the he&& did that come from? LOL while falling off my chair.
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Reviewed By: Amethyst (not in) On: September 18, 2004 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
LOL!
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Reviewed By: White Tiger Princess (not logged in) On: September 18, 2004 19:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
Were they referring to Inuyasha when speaking about the mark she had?
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