| "Digimon 02: Digidestined of Minerva" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: Clouddancer1014 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2007 22:10 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't usually like crossover/smut fanfics, but I became interested in the plot line enough to finish what you started. I read a bit of one of your more recent stories, and found your writing style had improved greatly. What are the odds of you picking this story up again?
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: ElwlRacsth On: April 15, 2007 16:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 2 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Although this was an interesting fic, I don't think you did Daisuke justice by glorifying him. I mean, yeah, he IS bashed in a lot of Takari fics, but that's no reason to turn him into a Gary Stu, is it? Good--no, awesome fighting skills, a terribly high IQ and he's compassionate? WAY too much. I also felt that Takeru's 'evil' explanation was a little weak. Could have been better. And after that, it felt like you just pushed him out of the way like he was nothing. Furthermore, Taichi and Sora's, Yamato and Mimi's, and Miyako's and Ken's relationships were never explained fully. A pet peeve of mine is that some people seem to think that crests are some sort of magical trinkets that make the Chosen all-powerful. You've demonstrated that here. What I think is that the crests are just items that help the Chosen channel their own power into their partner. But that's your opinion. One last thing. Why do you keep switching names? First it's Japanese, then it's the dubbed ones. Make up your mind. ...There also seems to be a lemon in almost every chapter...
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chess game was nice, and I was happy to see Kari beat that bastard at his own game!!! And Tai's here!!! He's my fave male character!!!
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
TK's suck a kcufing bastard and I hate him!!! He got exactly what he deserved!!!
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 15:40 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aw, Silk seems like such a nice nickname for Gatomon!!! And this chapter has more Daikari hentai!!! I WUV IT!!!
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the lemon, and again...I wish I could be in Kari's position!!! And it was just like Davis to stick up for Kari when his parents were laughing at her!!! TK's not man enough to handle someone like Kari...the little punk!!! But Davis can!!! LoL!
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2007 15:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I had to review this story again!!! I'm so kcufing jealous of Kari!!! She get's to be Davis' slave and...dammit...IT SHOULD BE ME!!! LoL!
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Reviewed By: Nesha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2006 14:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I really liked this story. I would recommend for you to go back to edit some chapters for the spelling/grammar, but other than that, it was really enjoyable. The plot was super-original, and I like that in the stories I read. I hope you continue to write Daikari fics! Daikari rules! Takari's boring!
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Title: DAKARI RULEZ
Reviewed By: leviathanz [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2006 08:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY THIS IS GOOD DAVIS HAD SEX KARI WITH HIS AND HER RUDE PARTS OUT BUT IT'S HENTAI SO I SHOULDN'T EXPECT LESS HOORAY FOR DAKARI TAKARI/TK FANS YOU STINK AND EAT THIS FANFIC
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Title: cute
Reviewed By: greigax29 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 14:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
haha verycute you should continue it soon this fic has some definite potential
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Title: CLASSICLY AWESOME
Reviewed By: ZeroBlade On: April 10, 2006 23:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
The chapters are awesmome i like storys that break down hentai scenes example:the two lovers go into a passionate kiss (i wont go any further (>.>)(
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Reviewed By: Minwolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2006 13:00 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great story, keep up the good work and I hope to see more of it soon. Most of the stories you write are very interesting too.
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Title: can't wait/FINALLY
Reviewed By: hyper kirby On: September 04, 2005 23:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Can't wait for you to update it dawg.FINALLY david[BLEEP]kari in bed,Take that Takari/TK fan.[BLEEP]you guys.
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Title: Dude!
Reviewed By: MASmaster On: August 29, 2005 20:34 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude! Hurry up and Write the next chappy! I've been waiting forever!
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Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: August 13, 2005 19:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Sorry that I've been absent for a while. I really like what's happening with Kyoto. I hope that she gets bashed through the rest of the story, at least until she FINALLY realizes that her attitude is the problem. I hope to have the next chapter of An Enemy's Friendship up soon. It's just that I've been working on yet another Digimon story. I got the idea last weekend and have been working on it since. I hope to have the start of that story up soon as well.
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