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| "2 Reign" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Reviewed By: NamiStar On: April 13, 2007 22:08 CDT
Comment/Review:
I rather binged reading this and the first one over a fairly short period of time, but it hooked me and was pretty dang good. I liked it, though there were some parts that were rough for the characters (the entire Miguel bit and Duo's questionable sanity, for instance)it all worked out. A minor thing is that the POV shifts can be confusing because sometimes the text can be slightly unclear or take several sentences to indicate who is speaking. As I said it's a minor thing and I think I adapted after several chapters. I even liked your OC's. They seemed to work more with the main characters rather than try to compete with them. Good Job with the whole thing in general. What can I say, happy endings of cool stories make me smile and bring on warm fuzzies.
| Reviewed By: CeeDee On: February 02, 2005 18:51 CST
Comment/Review:
Well done, thank you for your work!
| Reviewed By: Akira139 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2004 12:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your story Blood on the Window. Its great to see Duo back after his trip. Hope that you can post soon!
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