| "Deadly Duel" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Reviewed By: Redrenarde On: November 29, 2008 02:30 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story, however I felt I should tell you that during the scene with the mountain lion you spelled lion as loin almost every time.
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Title: A story to rock the ages...
Reviewed By: Neko_Kitana On: May 11, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am naturally a very creative writer...though I currently have no work posted here. I am currently writing a book...The Journal of Lost Stones.....and I would really like to congradulate the writer of this story. I thouroughly enjoyed this story...I laughed...I cried.....I fell out of my chair. I have used up most of the last three days reading this magnificent 22 chapter fanfiction. Grats....and also I give you two thumbs way, way up for the originality! Keep writing! Neko_Kitana super-smash_sister@dbzmail.com
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Reviewed By: Shadowcat22 On: November 06, 2004 17:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, another interesting chapter(s) anyway keep it up I wish to read what happens next.
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Reviewed By: Shadowcat22 On: November 03, 2004 18:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow interesting story please update soon I wish to see what happens with Yugi now that he's in the hospital.
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