| "Coercing Kakarot" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Title: DELICIOUS
Reviewed By: Caprice [MediaMiner Member] On: May 03, 2008 00:18 CDT
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I wonder if you're still around to read reviews, but nevertheless, I have got to say this is just one of my fantasies turned into a story! First V/B/G I've had the pleasure to read, although I've played it out in my head a lot, and oh wow, I bow down to you. Genius. I loved it so much. Had me panting all along. THIS IS WHAT SMUT IS ALL ABOUT.
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Reviewed By: Sarah aka Vega [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2007 23:38 CST
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OH MY GOD!!!!!!! This was soooooo hot as hell! Amazing! LOVED IT!!!!!! Loved everything about it! The way characters were portrayed. I believed it and that to me, was amazing. Good job.
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Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2006 11:58 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Very nice. It's a rare thing to read and I enjoyed it a lot.
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Reviewed By: SeveredWings On: May 13, 2005 03:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH GODS it was great...i had never read a pairing like this, but i can safely it flat did it form me!! THANKS!!
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Title: Wow..
Reviewed By: bura400 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 12, 2005 17:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I usually tend to avoid Goku/Vegeta yaoi, but this fic is great. I like the way they were IC and even though the lemon wasn't as graphic as some I am used to, the lemon was *extremely yummy*...I think I am going to go from hardcore V/B fan into a G/B/V fan as well... You're fic kept me on the edge of my seat the whole time and made me even blush. My temperature definately went up many degrees. *flushes even more* You managed a one shot lemon with a nice plot and I like the interactions between the characters; very believable. Good Job! Bura
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Reviewed By: Bulma16 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2005 18:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Don't let all those numbers go to your head Geeb, heh...Seriously though, I *LOVE* this fic. I love Bulma's assertiveness...Kakarot's innocence and Vegeta's self-assured attitude. I wasn't sure if I would like this fic but not because of the yaoiness. I wasn't sure how a die-hard yaoi fan was going to pull off a het sex lemon but you did really well!! *finishes off her ice tea* Heh, got a lil hot in here. I read this fic on another site a while back and I forgot to email you about it. What I'm trying to say in my dizzy blonde way is fantastic job Geeb *grins* Hmmm...how much sporking is it going to take to get you writing another het lemon? Preferably starring yours truly and my T-bone? *grins* Just kidding...sorta. ~Claire
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Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 02:19 CST
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I can't believe I forgot to review this! *blushes* Well, this is the story that got me hooked on yaoi. =P Darn you and your awesome writing and fantabulous plots! =D I loved the game of seduction that was being played on Goku...it put a whole new spin on Vegita and Goku for me. Thanx for letting me see the lime-light. *snickers*
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Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: Lady Pesh [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2005 20:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's very rare for me to give out all tens, but you've earned every one of them. This is likely the best V/G/B I've ever read. You write lemon wonderfully (far better than I could ever hope to). No detail overkill, yet I generally knew who and what was where at any given moment. I enjoyed how you utilized the general assumptions hinted at, however unintentionally, in the anime (the mutual attractions between all three characters). The fact that you managed to squeeze a feasible plot into this lovely romp AND keep all of them in character makes this a priceless piece. Welcome to my favorites list, GB.
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Title: Coercing Kakarot
Reviewed By: maccam [MediaMiner Member] On: December 20, 2004 15:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey can you continue this or is it only a one-shot like you said.it would be nice to read how vegeta explains everything and read has to how goku will get them back..just a thought...
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Reviewed By: StarHoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 13:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All Ican think to say is WOW. That was one of the best fics I've ever read. Kudos to you.
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Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2004 13:48 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, lovely fic! The world needs more B/V/G three-ways; I've only seen a few in my time. I can see a three-way relationship between them. After all, Vegeta dedicated his self -destruction in the Buu saga to Bulma *and* Kakarot. I can't believe you wrote this in two days, argh! I so wish I could do that, cause I have so many stories I want to write. I loved Vegeta's splutterings when Bulma first brought up the subject. Bulma played a bit of a dirty trick on Goku, but it was funny and worked out nevertheless. *Gorgeous* lemon and descriptions, and you handled the threesome well. I was afraid Vegeta would be trying to show off to Bulma, but he was very considerate to Goku, so that was satisfying to read. Great ending, too. Loverly!
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Reviewed By: richonyx [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 10:57 CST
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OMG. I mean...OMG. That was great! So great! Absolutely loved it!
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Title: :)
Reviewed By: aoshi4misao [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2004 00:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I would give you so much more than a 10 if i could on the enjoyment factor. I love to read good 3-ways and I can find very very few sadly. This was great! You should really consider writing more that are this style. I would read them all. Great job.
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Reviewed By: pixelgoddess [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2004 19:32 CST
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I read this first at work - which I shouldn't have done, because it distracted me for awhile. I like Bulma and Vegeta like this - I can just see them as an extremely sexual couple. (I am impressed by your vocabulary, by the way - censure, insidious, and obtuse aren't normally found in fanfiction.) Loved Bulma's line about Goku's clothes getting torn up. I think you and debbiechan write the only het stories I will read. Very hot. Probably the only complaint I have is Goku's initial reaction. Shouldn't he have been more worried/panic-stricken when Vegeta showed up? His reaction between being discovered and Vegeta wanting him to choose was a bit off. After that, he was back in character. Goku not being able to choose is just right. And Vegeta taking Goku was great. I'm hoping for a sequel, starting with Goku's reaction, maybe from the beginning of the scene with Bulma. I'd like to think he wasn't as oblivious as Bulma and Vegeta thought. And hopefully more Vegeta/Goku action.
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Reviewed By: star one On: November 01, 2004 16:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
All I to say is great fic!!!!!!!
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