| "First Times" Reviews/Comments [ 19 ] |
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Reviewed By: Liei On: July 12, 2004 12:44 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ABSOLUTELY AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it. The story line was great. I've never read something so creative. I've only read one story that would be better than this. It had a great story line as well. The originality and real life like scenario was great. I could read this one over and over again. I'll probably read it more than once. Great work. Keep this up.(:
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Reviewed By: AnimeDuneJediElf [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2004 15:43 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the lemon! ^_^ *|Mari|*
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Reviewed By: ice_princess_1185 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2004 23:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
please update soon!!!!
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Reviewed By: Channah On: July 29, 2003 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked this fic, only 2 comments: 1) Do you have any idea how PAINFULL! it is to use honey as lube? I guess you don't XD. 2) Why did you post this as an 1X2 fic? I just finished reading and I think it's an 2X1, maybe you should change it. But overall, great! I like your style of writing ^__^= |
Reviewed By: Quack On: June 05, 2003 01:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 3 of 10
Overall Rating: 4 of 10 Comment/Review:
GAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I thought you said that this was gonna be a 1x2! Tell me, why why why why why did I just read a 2x1 lemon?! OMIGOD...*weep* How could you do this to me?! *sob* At least...at least please change your summary to 2x1 since you DO HAVE 2x1 smut in here... |
Reviewed By: Mukuro [MediaMiner Member] On: January 07, 2003 15:56 CST
Comment/Review:
Congratulations.
That was a very nice fic. I wonder if there is a final chapter showing how the two pilots are now with their relationship.
I liked your style of writing. Very good choice of words and a very good plot. Your lemon was very creative. Heero is a better uke than Duo. Heero is good at folowing orders.
The romance was excellent. During the fic they told each other about their fellings and learned more about masks and all. I think it was too quick, you know, it all happened in one noght, but that's beside the point.
I loved the scars part. There is no soldier without scars. And many people say the scars show your experience in life. I think, in a stwisted way, I don't know, that scars are beautiful.
So, you made a good work. I liked it very much. I'll check your profile, and see if I can find more wonderful fics... |
Reviewed By: Ari Maxwell On: November 17, 2002 10:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Ohhhhhhh!! Lemony goodness!! Thats got ta be the longest fucking lemon i've read so far! and i've read a lot of them! *grins sheepishly at her henti mind* Oh well! Is there gonna be another chapter? |
Reviewed By: sugar*gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 06, 2002 00:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hi, i loved your fic... like totally 110% loved it...
Cutest line: too many of them too count! great job all round...
so sweet the ending *sniffles*
and his perfect soldier mask lay shattered at his feet... i belive that was it...
c ya
Sugar |
Reviewed By: Mabi On: September 25, 2002 20:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hm... Say what? I liked it very very much!! A ver nice story and the way things keep going is really (how can I say...) at sequence (?)... You know what I mean! ^_~ So... I hope you can put a nice ending to this! And those jerk Dr. J and G... I'll them then were to go!!! Well, anyway: liked it. Finish soon, will ya? Pretty please?! *makes Quatre puppy eyes* Oh yeah, speaking of which... you wouldn't happen to have a little pice of fic like this for Quatre and Trowa, would ya? *grins* 'cause it sure seemed to me that you mentioned something happening to then somewhere around here... *grins even more*. Anyway, if you do, please, let me know!! Kisu. Ja ne!! |
Reviewed By: Dawn On: May 24, 2002 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved the lemon! More please! |
Reviewed By: AngelKali02 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 14, 2002 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YAY! i loved the 11th chapter!!! awesome ^_^ |
Reviewed By: AngelKali02 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2002 23:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh please put out the next one soon! |
Reviewed By: fic2ficlemhed On: February 04, 2002 07:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this fic!!!!! its soo cute how heero and duo
are trying to control the intense love and desire
they share for each other!!!!!
i especially cant wait to see what heero has in
store for duo after that first kiss!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Angel On: January 24, 2002 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love what you have so far..I like the Pairing but I like what you've done to make them get together,The part with Dr. J was kinda funny.
Can't wait to read more chapters! |
Reviewed By: Cortney On: January 21, 2002 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Geep! Must continue with the 8th chapter, I'll be waiting! LOve the story so far, please keep up the good work, will ya?? ^_^ |
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