| "Games" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: LCM [MediaMiner Member] On: May 18, 2005 00:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mhhh. Just lovely. Your discriptions are great and there's certainly a flowing senation. It FEELS like Takaya and Naoe and is delicious and smart. Different in a GOOD way, it certainly didn't read like just 'another smut fic'. Marvalous job.
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Reviewed By: Fuzzy Eared [MediaMiner Member] On: April 23, 2005 19:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
That was incredibly well done. Your descriptions were surprisingly poetic and I really did feel as though you were writing this story for the characters rather than for the sex.
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Reviewed By: Aestrin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 25, 2005 19:37 CST
Comment/Review:
wow. i love it. and to think that so many of the stories i read now are NC-17. *mutters about stupid fanfiction sites and stupid idiot 12-year-olds reading what they're not supposed to* i like the idea of Takaya preparing to have sex with Naoe because he lost a bet, but then having it morph into a mutual desire...
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Title: Games
Reviewed By: wilyfox34 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2004 13:43 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very good fic but because it has some elements from ova as source material I could not completely give it a 10. It is an interesting story. I think you have a pretty good grasp of the characters. i was just a bit lost (source material) but I felt you did a wonderful job of conveying the emotional struggle that exist between Naoexkagetora/Takaya. Maybe if you did a longer story it would have been more meaningful because you could have explored more of the depth of emotion that you only touched the surface of in this fic. I thought it was an enjoyable read.
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Reviewed By: xeriah [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2004 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You rock and this fic rocks. First of all, the simple matter of it being a Mirage of Blaze fic, a rare jewel, makes it a wonderful feast. On top of that is the dept of characterization in this one shot. In the space of a single chapter you've conveyed Takaya's greatest struggles within himself and toward Naeo. Angst at its finest. What follows the angst? Ah, even better. Tastefully done and convincing, intensely psychological. Who knew sex could say so much about a character. Oh yeah. And it was really hot, too. *G*
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