| "You Darkness..." Reviews/Comments [ 133 ] |
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Title: Please update!!
Reviewed By: Ditany [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2008 02:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your story but it is not finished, the last time you updated it was back in 2005. Do you think you will continue it or have you abandoned it? I hope you continue writting this and other stories. I find your writting style very interesting and would like to read more.
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: February 19, 2008 23:48 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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have read your story again... wondering when you'll update it... hope you continue and finish this story... update as soon as you can... please and thank you...
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: May 28, 2007 04:51 CDT
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I really like your story... very good plot... hope you will update very soon...
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Title: Aleta6
Reviewed By: aleta6 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2006 08:06 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story. I think it was a great idea what you did to the leader and I think that should happend to all child molesters and rapists. Are planning on finishing it? I hope so. It's too great of a story to leave undone.
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Reviewed By: morgansgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2006 10:17 CST
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I just finished reading this story all over again and I have to say that I love the fluidness of the characters and the storyline. It's been months since you last updated but give your loyal fans like me a small tidbit of what's to come!
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Title: loving it.
Reviewed By: vbollman [MediaMiner Member] On: September 03, 2005 00:37 CDT
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I love the way you have brought the story together. but i can't wait to see what happens next. please update this story soon
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Title: talia
Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 05:34 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've always loved that solution for rapists. I wish it was real...now if only we had a potion or an empath hummmm... 'orion
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Title: omg!
Reviewed By: LadyOrion [MediaMiner Member] On: August 31, 2005 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can not belive that Inuyasha didn't kill someone right then and there!!! that was painful to read but superbly done with out being overtly desgusting...not that even the word rape isn't desgusting you did a good job of showing the horror with out palying the sick voyer(sp) 'Orion
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Reviewed By: Victoria Bollman On: August 23, 2005 17:16 CDT
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I love the way that you have made this story flow. it could be made into any of the movies. it has brought tears to my eyes more then once. i can not wait until the next chapter coomes out. please make it soon. started reading and just couldn't stop. and now i'm hanging to see what happens next. thank you for a wonderful story
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Reviewed By: shatter the sky comes quietly On: July 21, 2005 22:04 CDT
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Hey, it's been a month, why are you leaving us hanging like this? Please update soon.
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Reviewed By: leilachan [MediaMiner Member] On: July 14, 2005 03:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
man, i just finished your story after taking HOURS to do so! i swear chap. 35 was long but i think i shed a tear or two...and it wasn't because of the 3-4 beers i "downed" wilst reading it either. =p i can't wait for you to post a new chap so that i wont be confused about ryuukossei popping up. i have really enjoyed reading this fic and am sad that there is not more to read at the moment. when you have the time, please update. bye 'till then.
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Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member] On: June 10, 2005 14:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I started reading this yesterday and couldn't stop. You have been doing a great job. I remember reading you said you weren't a writer. You most definitely are! My favorite chapter though was 'Spring of Bliss'. What great lemonade was made from that lemon. When you crack a joke in the middle of writing I found it refreshing. I have become a little confused with ending of the lastest chapter but I am sure you will explain many of the questions we are having. How did the soul of Ryuukossei get into Satomi since Satomi was locked inside of Ryuukessei inside of the jewel?
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Reviewed By: Okaasan-7 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 12:45 CDT
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"have ended up with their own souls being tainted and are not suffering in the" -- Shouldn't the "not" be "now"? "purger"-- perjure. Nice touch that the evil came from the human. If Ryuukossei last saw IY and Sess' pa 1000 years ago that makes IY a 1000. I can buy that he's more than 65, 2 or 3 hundred, but a 1000 is pushing it. Unless you are saying it took Taisho nearly 1000 years to die from his wounds?
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Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member] On: May 23, 2005 21:10 CDT
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PLEASE...PLEASE UPDATE SOON!! SOB
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Reviewed By: Luna2005 On: May 15, 2005 12:08 CDT
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I love this astory so far!!!!!! Hope u Update soon
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