| "Historic Love" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Jet_black school... can't... log... in... o.e *twiiiitch* On: April 22, 2005 13:30 CDT
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o.e *twiitch* fuck it posted twice... why????? well... yeah... um... *looks around not sure what to say* o.o um... update???
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Title: ch 2
Reviewed By: Jet_black school... can't... log... in... o.e *twiiiitch* On: April 22, 2005 13:27 CDT
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pretty good... very funny... but (yes there is a but X_X) it could do with some more detail... and it seems like the story is going a bit too fast, slow down a bit and some detail here and there you know to make the story more enjoyable then it already is... all though you could not listen to me and do whatever the hell you want... i mean hell it's your fic not mine... but yeah whatever UPDATE!!! ^^U
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Title: ch 2
Reviewed By: Jet_black school... can't... log... in... o.e *twiiiitch* On: April 22, 2005 13:26 CDT
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pretty good... very funny... but (yes there is a but X_X) it could do with some more detail... and it seems like the story is going a bit too fast, slow down a bit and some detail here and there you know to make the story more enjoyable then it already is... all though you could not listen to me and do whatever the hell you want... i mean hell it's your fic not mine... but yeah whatever UPDATE!!! ^^U
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Title: ch 2
Reviewed By: Jet_black school... can't... log... in... o.e *twiiiitch* On: April 22, 2005 13:26 CDT
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pretty good... very funny... but (yes there is a but X_X) it could do with some more detail... and it seems like the story is going a bit too fast, slow down a bit and some detail here and there you know to make the story more enjoyable then it already is... all though you could not listen to me and do whatever the hell you want... i mran hell it's your fic not mine... but yeah whatever UPDATE!!! ^^U
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Reviewed By: firgodes7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2004 11:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a much better chapter though I still think that it could use a little more detailing. On the other hand I really enjoyed it can't wait till you update again.
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Title: for Historic Love
Reviewed By: Jackie Chester On: November 23, 2004 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was cute and funny. although i was a bit confused. forgive my ignorance, but was there another part of this story that i missed? all in all, i thought it was very creative and a corky twist on the typical new york setting in fake. bikky's voice was very fun. keep it up!! ^-^
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Reviewed By: firgodes7 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2004 17:12 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really think that you could have something with this story line but it felt very bland. I am only saying this because it's short but I understand that you are just testing the waters but I think that you could use a little more detailing through out this story and length. On the other hand I really did like the way your going with it , and wish that you will continue it.
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