| "Uncontrolled Passions" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Title: Awesomeness
Reviewed By: Silver Frost [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2006 07:51 CDT
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Great work, I really enjoy reading your fic, it's good to see the other girls in Hinata Inn take the spotlight for once. XD
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Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2006 22:02 CDT
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You aren't the only one who has hit a dry spell..... I also hit one, but I have patience.... Something I gained from years of being alone, is patience..... and I still have plenty more, honestly, as long as you update, I really don't mind how long it takes.... I have a whole lot to do so I have something to do.... =p poems and stories to write, a few reports to finish up, all that jazz.....
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Title: ..................
Reviewed By: .................. On: June 19, 2006 15:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
...............................update........................update........ ........UPDDAAAAAAAAAAAATEEEEEEE.......noooowwwwwwwwwwwww
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Title: UPDATE!
Reviewed By: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH On: June 08, 2006 19:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHY AREN'T YOU UPDATING. WHHHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!? NEED TO KNOW WHAT HAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEENNS! DRIVING ME INSAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANE. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update.
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Reviewed By: ? On: May 14, 2006 19:41 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, its been months since your last update. I love this story and by the looks of it a lot of other people do. I'm just wondering if your gonna continue this or not?
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Title: ?
Reviewed By: ? On: May 06, 2006 00:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, its been fun, but please update. Its been at least 7 months! 7 MONTHS! I need to know what happens pleeeeeeeeeeeeease!
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Reviewed By: shadowdragonking666 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2006 18:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
the chapters are not long enough.
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Title: UPDATE!!!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 20:58 CST
Comment/Review:
UPDATE SOON !!!!!!!! My standerd reply to when writers dont update for months at a time and it really irritates me*twitch*
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Title: ...
Reviewed By: Dark Lord Tokunaga [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2005 07:25 CST
Comment/Review:
This is one of the best Love Hina fanfictions i have read so far... Keep up the good work and update soon, or Crono will be coming after you...and your head will be one of the many in my collection of fanfiction writer's heads... NOT THAT HEAD YOU SICKO !!!!!!!!!!!!
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Title: i rly hope u update
Reviewed By: KageChidori [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2005 22:42 CDT
Comment/Review:
plz update! i beg u! this is defonitly 1 of my fav stories, i read it on ff.net 2, glad that i found this chap on this website. plz update!
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Reviewed By: Silverback [MediaMiner Member] On: September 05, 2005 20:14 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent Love Hina story! Motoko was always my favorite (well, other that Shinobu, but that was just because she is so darn cute!) so I am glad to see Motoko in the spotlight. It's been so long since your last installment, I hope you decide to go on with it at some point.
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Reviewed By: ElementalPG On: June 08, 2005 06:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Not bad really. There was a pretty good, although short, plot. Please do continue this piece of work.
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Title: o_o Holy...
Reviewed By: Good Story Reviewer On: January 24, 2005 21:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
If only there was a higher characters maximun, I'd write a good review. You did this very professional. I was surprised(in a good way)to see that Keitaro and Motoko ended up together. Plus, it seems Naru is going to fall victim to Kanako. It took me about an hour or two te read all you had, and aside from (some)spelling errors, it was quite enjoyable to read. I also though it was (quite) devious to pair brother and sister, and the Naru mask..Didn't seethat onecoming. I was most impressed how you kept the sexual content to a low, I was actually hoping for more of a Romance then a "lemon" Fan fiction. Your fifth was done perfectly though. To bad you didn't refer to Suu at all...>.>;. Keep writing those good storys.
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Title: the BEST
Reviewed By: dragonmaster86 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 14:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good, better, BEST! This is the BEST Love Hina fanfic I've EVER read. Please finish it!
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Title: Holy shit!
Reviewed By: True Dark Zero [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2004 00:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
duuuuuuuuuuuuude......or dudet, this is one of the best f**king love hina's i've EVER read, please finish it when you can
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