Title: Eyes Of The Lost
Reviewed By: tyleet88 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 11:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
The story has a nice begining, it could have been abit longer maybe, but it seems to be going in the right direction. You should keep it up, it's interesting and creative. I would like to see where is goes..Update plz
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