| "If I Stop To Think About It" Reviews/Comments [ 5 ] |
Reviewed By: sylviaviridian [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 06:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What a fun fic! It's fascinating to see a fic from Hakuryuu's POV. I'd love to see more of this. Now to play the screen name game. GuiltyRed...I'm guessing you're a Schuldig fan? Or am I just obsessed with Weiss Kreuz? Well, okay, I already know the second is true. It's always just fun to try and guess where people's screen names come from. ^_^ Neway, well done! Hakuryuu is so cute.
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Reviewed By: Sushi-girl On: June 25, 2005 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! Really liked your fic.Very funny, and sweet too. The first chapter was my favourite. Never thought about the possibility of Hakuryu analysing the guys butts. loll
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Reviewed By: Miko no Tears and Aya [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 16:39 CST
Comment/Review:
that was cute! i hadnt thought much on what hakuryu might think of the others. that you for sharing that!
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Reviewed By: divastarz63 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2005 12:55 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I like it!! I luv the way you've portrayed Goku. Are you gonna make another chapter?
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Reviewed By: Seki Tusae On: January 20, 2005 19:16 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
LOL! That's some funny stuff there. I really enjoyed the fic and hope you'll do more. I never really thought about what Jeep would think, so this is new grounds for me.
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