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Title: It was really good!
Reviewed By: fullmetalguitar [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2005 14:46 CST
Comment/Review:
I hope they can recover from this!!! I have a few choice characters I would now like to beat the shit out of though... hehehehe.... JJ for hitting Dee, that is NEVER allowed... Ryu for being so like Ryo... Smack Dee around some, but can't touch the face. Or chest. Or, yeah, his body, so nevermind, no hits for Dee. Rose. Yes, we need to all gang up on Rose! *cheers*
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Reviewed By: firgodes7 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 25, 2004 17:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job with your first fanfic. I truelly enjoyed your story. Though I felt that you had to many flashbacks in this story "it threw me off a little bit." On the good side this is a very intersting story that you have on here and hope to see you keep writing and improving your writing skills.
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Reviewed By: LAChick [MediaMiner Member] On: December 23, 2004 02:04 CST
Comment/Review:
awwwww poor Ryo! DANM ROSE!! I HATE HIM! POOR DEE although he is an idiot. Good story. Keep writing.
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