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| "And Then There Were Three" Reviews/Comments [ 10 ] | Reviewed By: Vbprl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2016 20:29 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awesome!
| Reviewed By: nutnatz [MediaMiner Member] On: March 30, 2009 16:33 PDT
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I usually refrain from reading YAOI, but I liked your style so I decided to brave it and wow, I was blown away by what you managed to do. The depth, emotions, jealousy, lust. I think you hit all of their reations on a head. To tell the truth, I've actually always found it hard to think of Bulma and Goku consumating any feelings for the very reason she gave. At one point she thought Goku was hot (when she first saw him after he grew up a little) but really, Vegeta was her match. She could have had Goku even before Chi Chi came back into the picture and claimed him, but she didn't!
| Title: And Then There Were Three
Reviewed By: SonSofia [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2007 17:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I...*sniff* I love you. You're so perfect and so nice for writing this. Thank You ever so much, you are a goddess. This story is HOT. My normal forte is yaoi, any kind. But I've always been looking for threesomes of my favorite three people in DBZ. You have finally done it, and it was great. I read 'Coercing Kakkarot' and was disappointed that it didn't go father, but then I discovered this, and all I really have to say is...Thank you, you're the best.
| Reviewed By: Br0keback On: January 05, 2006 20:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I HAVE BEEN LOOKING FOR THIS STORY FOREVER NOW! Seriously, i read it like, a million years ago and have been wanting to read it again for some time!! i looked everywhere!! this is the ONLY fanfiction *that and Gutterball's insert* i can read that involves vegeta and anyother man... i just cant read it. cant imagine it. sorry to ramble on but im just so relieved to have finally found it!! but now i think i'll go and read some more BV fanfiction. *as much as i loved your story its still a hard image to shoulder* great, great, great job on this story though!!
| Reviewed By: fyrechylde [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2005 00:15 PST
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Wow...this is beautiful, LisaB. I loved Gutterballs's Coercing Kakarrot and the way you added to her story is just awesome. The anguish and decisions were realistic and it draws you deep into the story. You had me on the edge of my seat with the pregnancy part. *shakes head* Marvelously done!
| Reviewed By: TT On: March 05, 2005 06:24 PST
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I was always turned off by the yaoi warning and never gotten past just the story's summary. But since you are the authur, i put aside my prejudise. Well... i think i am taking it well, its romantic, a bit of angish, touching, and as my first yaoi, acceptable. Now since i can stand reading threesome, maybe i can stand reading your "Infidelity" afterall(as long as BV are gona have a happy ending after all the angish).
| Title: Bravo!
Reviewed By: Pareathe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2005 15:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't have nearly enough time at the moment to write a worthy review, but I wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story. It was believable and beautifully written. Inspired or not, you've got true talent. It's only demonstrated that much more by your ability to write around someone else's original story and keep the flow even. Brilliant work!
| Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 12, 2005 13:50 PST
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I've been pimping this fic all around... :D Nice to see that people take so much notice of me... O.o Well, I loved this fic, I really liked how you had it from Bulma's POV - it really made me feel for her. OK, so the main thing I felt was jealousy, but hey... I did feel really bad for Goku, being the noble. selfless person I am, I'd be willing to take on the poor man so that he doesn't feel too lonely... :D I won't toss him aside for someone else... I'd be more than willing to take on both him and Bardock... :D :D :D Anyway, it's an excellent fic - several people have said that it's one of the best DBZ fics they've read for a long time, and now I'm saying it too... believe us, it's GREAT.
| Reviewed By: TemptingTemptation [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2005 00:35 PST
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Finally! I was forced to keep a thought in my head for days without losing it! The content of my review may be degraded, but I will try. Normally, I don't read yaoi, but for you I made an exception and I am so glad that I did. I love the fact that you made Vegeta loyal to Bulma to the point where he wouldn't act on his desires and dishonor her. At the same time Bulma was willing to sacrafice her pride to give her lover what he desired. Bringing all three together was intense, but unstable. I like how in the end it was Vegeta's fear of losing Bulma that ended it. I understand that you can love two people at the same time, but realistically you can't have your cake and eat it too. You made Goku out to be the hero when he displayed enough common sense to say no to Vegeta. I feel a little sad for him, cause now he's alone, but I like the fact that they all thought of someone besides themselves. Anyways, my first review was better, but I hope I hit all the points that I wanted too. Very good job!
| Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2004 04:31 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been waiting for DAYS to be able to review this, and I hope I can remember everything I wanted to say. I usually resist reading fics like this, because it is almost impossible for me to think that Vegeta could be with both Bulma and Goku at the same time (he seems to be only capable of focusing on one obsession at a time), but Barb told me it was wonderful and so I decided to give it a chance. I'm SO glad I did. This is, hands down, one of the best fics I have read in a long time. You pulled this off you realistically, getting the characters down, making me feel so much for all of them. It is simply an amazing piece of work. Kudos also to Gutterball, for having the original idea and writing her fic so well that it inspired you to gift us with ths. I am impressed beyound words. Yet another fic for you to be proud of.
| Reviewed By: Orchideater [MediaMiner Member] On: December 30, 2004 17:05 PST
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Great fic-- it was a wonderful fleshing-out of Gutterball's oneshot. A million thanks for making Goku intelligent and in character, and not having him blubber and have brain lapse the moment Vegeta speaks. It BUGS me when people write him like that! The jealosies and emotions all rang very true. Loved the face-off after Vegeta caught Goku with Bulma-- very hot. The ending was a good ending, very realistic, but the more I thought about it the more it didn't sit right with me. Bulma and Vegeta really did use Goku for their own pleasure, and at the end they are huggling in their cozy love nest talking about how much stronger their relationship is now, while Goku has been left bruised and totally out in the cold until, what, the 40 or so years until Bulma croaks. I almost would have liked to see a little more punishment on their parts (though maybe a new baby at her age is punishment enough). Ah well, maybe Goku will find himself a new gal, and when B+V are sleep-deprived, sex-deprived, up to their ears in dirty diapers and having trouble with Trunks' jealosy of the new baby, he can bring her by to gloat. XD
| Reviewed By: debbiechan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2004 07:25 PST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Just testing to see if mm.org will let me review this time and to say: this is truly the best dbz fic I've read in a long while, not just a lemonaide fest but fine fine erotica with a great story and a g-ddamned excellent Goku characterization! And it deserves more reviews! *go through little review, go through!*
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