| "500yrs to wait" Reviews/Comments [ 173 ] |
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Reviewed By: baka_mai_28 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 20:13 EST
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AH! I love your fanfiction! i hope that you update soon, your fic is one of the best fics that i have read in a REALLY long time. Keep up the good work, and very original;) i like. 10 is for you.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2005 13:42 EST
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Hehe, sounds like Kouga got busted good! InuYasha may be the Lord of the Land...but did anyone tell him that "Marriage Councilling" came with the job? -- Oh, goody...more 'history' on the way.
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Reviewed By: Sara S. On: March 19, 2005 01:40 EST
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Loved the story:) Can't wait to read more!!!
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Title: gr...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi) On: March 19, 2005 00:41 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
what did he do what did he do you killing me with wate i need to kno!!! please???? ^_^ well keep up the good work and update again soon! ^_^
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Title: cherylv@seward.net
Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 18, 2005 23:03 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was totally Awesome! And yes I have to say another favorite (LOL!!). He's being sooo sweet with Kagome and I think that is just too cool. Whatever he did when she was a baby couldn't have been that bad, seems to me shes' turned out okay to me...If it was bad wouldn't the time line have changed? And finding out about Kouga now that was a hoot!! LMAO on that one!!! Well I hope the next chapter is soon this story is just the best and getting even better as it goes. Thanks for sharing, your doing Awesome!!!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged in On: March 18, 2005 21:28 EST
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hehehehe. i'm sorry, this just had me laughing hysterically so i thought i should stare. you said that Tetsusaiga was now under the conealment to look like a pocket knife, right? have you ever seen Crocodile Dundee? if so, you'll get it, if not, he's a really awesome backwoods dude from Austrillia. SO...he's in new york city (or one of dem big places) and is walking around and is stopped by some dudes. one pulls out a knife and tells him to give him his money. his retort is, "you call that a knife?" ::pulls out a Machete :: "this..is a knife" and then all i saw after that is InuYasha pulling out this little dinky pocket knife and WOSH, its a freaking giant sword. LOL. THAT's a sword. heheheh. sorry. just thought i should share. glad to hear things are good between kag and inu...and naughty Kouga for watching porn. (i can't seen him dancing but the porn...i believe it). i'm still up in the air about inu and the past but i see you're getting to it. great story as always and keep it up.
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Reviewed By: morwen_re [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 15:50 EST
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good! you've got to write more soon!!!! please!
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Reviewed By: Just a comment On: March 16, 2005 18:26 EST
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You are using the word 'dowry' incorrectly. A dowry is "Money or property brought by a bride to her husband at marriage." It does not come from a bridegroom. The girl's family must give the groom a dowry with the girl. If the groom gives the bride's family gifts, it is called a 'marriage settlement'.
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Reviewed By: DarklessVasion (nsi) On: March 16, 2005 16:42 EST
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Awww, cute and fun. Although I can see that InuYasha really needs to have time and privacy to have a good long talk with Kagome. She may know that he has waited 500 years, but until they talk about it, she won't really KNOW what he went thru. -- Great.
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Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 16:23 EST
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another great chapter! i was just thinking, maybe you could get kagome jealous over all the things her friends saw since she left them?
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Title: awww...
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: March 16, 2005 16:12 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awww... how sweet keep uip the good work and update again soon please?
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Reviewed By: PrncessS (not logged in) On: March 16, 2005 00:36 EST
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yay, update! very good, i'm glad they finally got together, please update soon!
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Title: cherylv@seward.net
Reviewed By: akdreamer On: March 15, 2005 23:49 EST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the best chapter yet! I'm still LMAO!!! Inu passing out and not letting go of Kagome, what a hoot...But them waking up together was sooo sweet. I can now see Inu and Kags dancing it up on Mankees' island paradise.... Hope all goes well with her family and I'm tring to figure out how the family is going to take the dowrey....What could possibly be in those chest he's packed in the car? Hhhmmmm......Oh well I'll see in the next chapter, see ya soon and thanks for sharing you are doing an AWESOME job!!!
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Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~not logged on On: March 15, 2005 22:15 EST
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Sesshoumaru scoffed...SESSHOUMARU SCOFFED!!!!!! LMAO ROTF!!!!! that was priceless. now, mind you i'm sick and my throat is killing me but i roared when i saw that, earning me a few misplaced frowns from family. LOL. great chapter, i don't think i could be happier with how it turned out. somehow, though, i have a forboding feeling that InuYasha cursed them by thinking that 'no one' could get between them. i hope i'm wrong but i can't see it being that easy. so...sesshiles has kids? where they be? LOL. great update and keep it going
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Reviewed By: Star Keeper (not logged in) On: March 15, 2005 19:02 EST
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hehehe!! that was mean, but i think he needed it to help him face Kagome. i guess he was better off inebreated when he first saw her, then he wouldn't freak out. but still, that was HILARIOUS!! i shall laugh for a week now, arigato!! ~~~Starlett~~~
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