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 Reviewed By: jaimed1968 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 19, 2010 08:49 EST
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This piece has been nominated at the Feudal Association! Founded in 2005 by author/artist, Dark Avenger, the Feudal Association consists of writers, artists, and enthusiasts of the InuYasha fandom. But aside from that, we are also proud to say that we are an awards guild that recognizes fan-fiction and artwork. Several times a year we nominate, vote, and hand out honors to some of the best creations in the fandom. Our official website can be found here: http://feudal.animara.org/ The current nominations pages are here: http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanfiction (Fiction) http://feudal.animara.org/nominated.php?type=Fanart (Fanart) Check them out to see what you were nominated for! Our Yahoo Group, where the nominations and voting occurs, can be found here: http://groups.yahoo.com/group/FeudalAssociation/ **Please note that FA membership is closed during voting. Congratulations and feel free to join and/or help us spread the word about our group! ~ The Feudal Association **Please Note: You may receive this notice more than once if you've been nominated for several awards. They will appear as reviews on your nominated works.
 Reviewed By: Deathmvp [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 21, 2008 08:45 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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This was a very nice story and a very enjoyable read. At first I was scared to read it as it look like you where going to just strech it out but you did it very well. Thank you for posting such a good story.
 Reviewed By: dreamer789 [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 31, 2007 00:07 EDT
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your an amazing writer i loved the story it was amazing, keep up the unbelievable work.
 Reviewed By: Jewelbrat2  On: November 25, 2006 15:59 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
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This is the best story EVER! I always come back to it when i need a good story to just read and relax. keep writing stories like this, your an amazing author. ^_^
 Title: Hurray
Reviewed By: KelseyFantasy [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 14, 2006 08:43 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hurray!! Wright more please moto moto. I just love a good Sess/Rin fic and this is good. its even more fun that it is taboo ^^ Ur story will go to the favorites.
 Reviewed By: HopelesslyEscaflowne [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 12, 2006 23:36 EST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is a very original story that I thoroughly enjoyed. Your plot was good and solid and the ending was just as good as the beginning, which is very important. ;) You left no loose ends I can think of which is very impressive. Definitely a great read! As for the technical side of the story..it has some issues. The grammar needs a lot of work all throughout the story. It shouldn't be too hard to correct since most of the errors are repetitous. Your spelling could also use some work but not as much as the grammar.
 Reviewed By: maroongoddess [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 23, 2005 02:22 EDT
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Overall Rating: 9 of 10
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Aww! It's over? I hope you make a sequal to this! It was very good! make sure to inform me if there is a sequal! -MG
 Reviewed By: Tarialla (lazy-ness)  On: September 21, 2005 00:39 EDT
Comment/Review:
*sobs*!!!! That was an excellent fic!! I loved it!! *glomps Inumuffin* Suffering for 500 years... then drinking when he could be seeing his love. Oh, Inu. Crazy thing. Er, I really need sleep, and I haven't done my math yet because I wanted to read this... well, and math sucks, but anyways! I would love to leave you a 209732 page long review full of the squeeing, crying, and fangirling that this fic deserves, but I cannot do so at this time. Le sob. But I am totally telling all my Inuyasha obsessed friends!! And I'm in the anime club so word shall spread! *cackles* Ku ku ku ku!
 Title: to cheer or cry
Reviewed By: Inusbabe [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 18, 2005 15:33 EDT
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It has come to a end... I want to cheer and cry at the same time. This was one of best stories I have read. I am going to go back and reread it. Keep up the great writing.
 Reviewed By: ladygeri [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 13, 2005 21:01 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This is byfar one of the best and one of my most favorite stories. I am kind of sorry to see it end. Lol. I've gotten used to anticipating the next chapter. I can't wait for your next one. How about one of Sango and Miroku during the 500 year wait? (just a suggestion...lol).
 Reviewed By: Angel_of_Elements [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 12, 2005 21:25 EDT
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That was an awesome ending. I am kinda sad that it ended. Well, I am looking foward for your future work!
 Title: good job
Reviewed By: Raikor and Taikor inc [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 12, 2005 11:14 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i would have to say this is probably one of the best storys i have read that both keeps everyone in charecter and throws something completely knew into the mix of things. good job, and good luck on all your futre endevors.
 Title: amazing
Reviewed By: love-me-as-me [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 11, 2005 18:06 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
i love your ending and it would be so cool if you did a sequal and you paires aiko w/takoda and dakotah w/shinji that would be cute. well great story. and i can't wait for more stories to come.
 Title: missbritt
Reviewed By: missbritt [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 10, 2005 17:35 EDT
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thats was a really good story you did a very good job on it well i cant waot to read what others you have write also well thanks for a really good story :)
 Title: Major Applause!
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 10, 2005 10:55 EDT
Comment/Review:
Wonderful story with a sweet ending! One of the best fics I've ever read & the writing was awesome. I look forward to your future work! InuGrrrl
 Reviewed By: WoodShop2300 [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 10, 2005 04:40 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great story. You most defently did as you set out to do as i enjoed reading your story very much. Only one thing could have made it better in my mind and that was a 150yr latter or so section as well. But i am in no way mad/angry/etc that it's not there i just like the whole consept of immorlity and the mort time you can make pass the more i'l like it. I hope to see more stories from you.
 Title: *Sniffle*
Reviewed By: akdreamer38  On: August 10, 2005 03:30 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I'm sooooo gonna miss this story. It was so awesome that I've copied it so I could read it over and over and over and over again. That was so cute having the flea tell them the story of their (Inu and Kag) adventure, what cracks me up is he was always running away......LOL! Well GF I hope to see more of your writings again soon so keep me up to date and I'll see ya at the next review...cherylv@seward.net
 Title: AMAZING!!!!
Reviewed By: flrsblue [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 10, 2005 02:03 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
That was a perfict ending to a fantastic story.
 Reviewed By: fallenangel7583~NSI  On: August 10, 2005 00:16 EDT
Comment/Review:
very good story. i am so glad to see how it ended up. i was beginning to wonder if our hero's were going to end up at war but all turned out well. i'm really happy wiht how fluffles dealt with the demons, very well done. man, teh kids were little mirror images, weren't they? hehe. tell me inu is going to have to fend off kouga's cub away from his daughter? LOL. the part of inu smacking kouga's ass had me rolling for a good ten minutes. very well done!! i love this story, it is very well written and is most definetly one of my favorites. keep up teh great work!!!
 Reviewed By: reader1  On: August 09, 2005 21:44 EDT
Comment/Review:
great job! i enjoyed your fanfic. keep up the good work and i look forward to any other fics you happen to write.
 Title: 500yrs to wait
Reviewed By: Dilanda Albata [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 07, 2005 23:37 EDT
Comment/Review:
I think that went rather well^^ Nice chapter, keep it up =P
 Reviewed By: missbritt [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 04, 2005 02:27 EDT
Comment/Review:
hey its another good chapter good job ;) keep it up ok
 Title: Review Chapter Twenty-nine
Reviewed By: Kin-chan Pandun [MediaMiner Member]  On: August 03, 2005 23:45 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Fantastic chapter. I really liked the Wovoka/Kagome interaction, and I'd like to see more of it, as well as more of Kagome's interactions with everyone that Inuyasha knows, but she does not. I'm really looking forward to that. ... I think the lemon part could have been better,but it fit in with the story well enough, and was pretty decent, if lacking in juicy detail. ... I hope they don't fall asleep out there. ... When will he be showing her the dojo? Will she get a chance to practice and/or demonstrate her kyudo (japanese archery) skills? ... I really would like more interaction between Kagome and those that have only heard of her second hand. ... ... ... ... Can't wait for the next chapter, Kin.
 Title: GREAT!!!
Reviewed By: alize  On: August 03, 2005 17:25 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Awsome update!!! i love your story i cant wait for the next chapter. please dont leave us loyal fans waiting to long.
 Reviewed By: elementalobsession  On: August 01, 2005 18:44 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!! *sniffles*
 Title: nice
Reviewed By: Zach  On: July 30, 2005 07:26 EDT
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
they seemed a little out of character even from the beginning, but when 500 yrs passes then they gotta be different lol, u could say u have an excuse, neway it was very good tho it just took me 8 hrs to read all of it (i think) and now its 7:30 am and im really tired, gotta sleep, hope u write more fanfics!
 Title: SWEET!!!!
Reviewed By: akdreamer38  On: July 30, 2005 04:10 EDT
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Now that was totally AWESOME!!!! Well done GF!! Using Kouga as a pinata, now that was FUNNY!!! Can't wait for him to be able to move again and see what he might think he'll do!!! And the mating that was sooooooo sweet.....almost made me cry...LOL! Okay now, when's the wedding and is the honeymoon going to be in the Cribbean? you know a party is in order with Mankee and the bird youkai? LOL!! love them Bird Youkai LMAO!!! Well I'll hear from ya later and I'm glad to see the update, I was starting to worry you weren't around anymore (*sighs looking around room everyday*) hehehe....you take care and well see ya around!!!!!!!
 Reviewed By: New Fan  On: July 30, 2005 03:14 EDT
Comment/Review:
I hope that not the end of the story?? I glad that Inuyasha has finally found happiness. Now their lives together can finally being. Update soon.
 Title: Nice...
Reviewed By: InuGrrrl [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 30, 2005 00:21 EDT
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I want a more graphic lemon! lol Oh well... Very nice, but i swear this seemed like an ending...is it over? :sniffle:
 Reviewed By: Morbid angel  On: July 30, 2005 00:01 EDT
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Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Omg what are you going to do next? I can't wait to read what ever you have instore for this couple. How will the matting ritual change Kagome? Will Inuyasha finaly be as happy as we all want him to be? Omg I want to know what happens, update ASAP.
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