| "38 Shades" Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2010 07:51 CST
Comment/Review:
This story has haunted me for years. I'll probably never take it off my favorites list just in case.
|
Title: Whooooa dude
Reviewed By: Mizz Eveal On: August 07, 2005 11:40 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dude, that was liek totally like awesome!!!!i luved it, that was so kool, very good imagery, and may i add from the last chappie or whatever, good job for killing that bitch kikyo!!!XD!!!and also ,you wrote all this in one day?!?!?!??!?!WHOA DUDE!!!!UPDATE SOON MAN!!!IT's been like...on, two, three...O.O...SEVEN MONTHS!!!!WRITER"S BLOCK BE GONE!!!!! Peace out!!
|
Reviewed By: Mr Wednesday [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 23:58 CDT
Comment/Review:
wow... i mean, just wow... one cannot even begin to describe the horrific majesty of this fic... most fic plotlines are atrocious, non-existant; but this... it has such a devoloped plot... on a Christopher Golden level... past it, even... and the suspense... it is better than the books that i read... i sincerely urge you to continue this fanfic.
|
Reviewed By: knightmare On: February 25, 2005 20:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is a great story.nuf said
|
Reviewed By: HeartStar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2005 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really love this story. Plaese write more soon.
|
Reviewed By: Xaenthe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2005 00:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh. My. God. Your story is so...haunting. I broke out in absolute goosebumps in the flashback when InuYasha is talking to Miroku about his little brother "Maru" and the band and Kouga...I was like...NOOOOOOOOOOOO...Like fujin, your last reviewer, I'm not the biggest fan of Sess/Kag, but this plotline definitely makes it okay...I...*wahhhhhh* She must save InuYasha's soul!!! And find that bastard Shiro! Fucking psycho bastard! One thing I don't get...if there was a fire somewhere else in the building and it got so far as to burn the kids inside that classroom instead of them just dying of smoke inhalation (I'm talking about the scene where Kagome dreams of the burnt corpse kissing her), how come the school is still standing? Were there just major repairs? I can't wait for your next update! Happy writing! ~Xaenthe
|
Reviewed By: fujinakaheero(not signed in) On: January 16, 2005 13:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow.. very deep story you got going on right now, I've never read anything like this for any of the animes I like to read about. This sotry is dark and I believe in these kidna things with the evil ommans and spirits who need help... no wonder I'm still afraid of the movie "The Grudge" It's all about Ghost and evil spirits who kill humans by using their fear. This is a really great fic and I'm not just saying that to be nice either, I'm being truthful. The 3rd chapter with the flashback of what happened at the school made me feel like I was there with Kagome watching the scene unfold before my very eyes and that was a pretty freaky thing. You must continue because this is a good fic that I want to keep reading about. Once I sign in I'm gonna be adding this fic to my fav list so I can see when you update this story. Until next time.. Ja Ne!
|
Reviewed By: queenserena12345 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2005 12:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Rin:Why is Rin and Rebekuka reviewing?/Because it said review time...And we always review every story we read...?/Rin:...Oh.../*hits head*You need sleep too, Rin...But good job! Not a big fan of Sess/Kag, but I love the plot, keep going!
|
