| "Return To Me" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: i'm reviewing
Reviewed By: Ramdonperson [MediaMiner Member] On: July 03, 2005 17:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
>> yes.. i'm .. reviewing.. so you can go on and finish the story already! who was the person that was talking to Ai when she left anyway? i don't know these names T.T
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Reviewed By: Chiffani-Chan On: May 06, 2005 08:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, I really like this, you maded this fic so oringnal, but it still stayed true to the characters, and the story line. Please updated soon!! I haved founded many Detective Conan Fic I actually want to con't reading, but this is one of them! When you update may you email me at wildcatguardtrumpet@msn.com. Keep up the good work!
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Reviewed By: Karurie On: February 18, 2005 21:16 CST
Comment/Review:
This was quite a dark chapter. I like it! Please update soon! Maybe the next chappy could be on Ayumi's feelings about Conan's death.
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Reviewed By: littlerayoflight On: February 17, 2005 19:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I don't want to kill you. I want to thank you. Thank you for writing such a good fic. It has the perfect mixture of sadness and loss and the words fit together nicely. Although it reminded me of the day my dog died, the first time I had felt the pain of loss, it was still a realy good fic. A true tear-jerker. Change the names, add more chapters, and you might be able to sell this as a book.
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