| "Seed" Reviews/Comments [ 4 ] |
Title: Seed
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2005 17:45 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Lella [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2005 11:41 CST
Comment/Review:
great update, but I couldn't get the second half of it, i was wondering is there any other ways of getting to it? Update soon, plz.
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Reviewed By: Lella [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 16:40 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's really good, update soon please.^_^
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Title: Short and sour
Reviewed By: Dee-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: January 24, 2005 15:55 CST
Comment/Review:
A paragraph hardly equals a chapter. This paragraph-chapter summed up two days with less than three lines! A huge opportunity for readers to become acquainted with the setting, the characters, and the plot was missed, as well as a chance for you to flex your muscles as a writer. I highly suggest that you redo chapter one again, because the idea of a Witch Hunter Robin prequel fan fiction is brilliant. You just need to take this idea and run with it.
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