| "Cadence To Arms" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Reviewed By: Akikazu [MediaMiner Member] On: January 08, 2006 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this chapter, I hope that you will update again, though you haven't for almost a year now. Recently I've been combing the web for good crossovers and yours ranks at the top of my list.
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Reviewed By: deafening silence [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 23:16 CST
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This is, without a doubt, the most elegantly written RK/IY crossover i have ever read. The way you have seamlessly merged the two worlds is simply amazing, and your writing style in general is somthing i can only envy. Your attention to detail brings your story to life, and makes it more than just words on a page. As for the plot itself, what can i say? Pure genius. I'm glad that you decided to bring kenshin in before he went rurouni on us. It would be kinda hard for him to accomplish anything with blunt sword, ne? Anyway, now that i've perhaps gone a little overboard on the worshiping of the georgosity that is amaya-chan, i have to say that i'm a little dissapointed on how you've been developing the secondary characters. Until the last bit of the second chapter, i feel like you were maybe ignoring them. A lot. I'm not saying i want you to put them front and center of every scene, but a little interaction would be nice. As far as the primary characters go, i have absolutly no complaints whatsoever about how they are being portrayed. Everything you have written seems spot-on to me. What else...It seems I've found someone who actually know how to spell the character's names! *cheer!* Also, i am fond of the way you're avoiding any excessive kikyo-bashing. I believe firmly that if anyone actually watched the entire series, they wouldn't hate kikyo. There's more to her than "Die Inuyasha!" and "Come to hell with me Inuyasha!" I think you see this too. Oops! no more characters. Ja! |
Reviewed By: LilChic24 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 13, 2005 11:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ooooo! i love this story!!! can u update plz??? i love this story more then any other stories out there! plz plz plz update!
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Reviewed By: slivercat On: March 02, 2005 16:28 CST
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Will you ever update? This is a seamless blending of both anime, a vision to behold and admire. It is a crime to not continue this story.
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Reviewed By: Tsukiko-san [MediaMiner Member] On: February 28, 2005 15:00 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
For godsakes u need to update!! >.< i want u to update soon!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: chanter Guardian On: February 09, 2005 16:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Y ou have to update!!!!!! It's really good. There are not alot of Kenshin/Kagome pairings so u have to continue cause that is like one of my favorite pairings!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE UPDATE!!!!
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Reviewed By: kaja1234 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2005 20:03 CST
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! HOW COULD YOU END IT LIKE THAT?! NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! YOU-MUST-UPDATE!!!!!!!LOVING THE INEVITABLE FICNESS HERE, SO UPDATE!!!!!THIS IS GOING ON MY FAV LIST!
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Reviewed By: wynter89 (MM) On: February 03, 2005 22:09 CST
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IT IS LONG BUT WORTH IT. DAMN IT THE CHAP WAS STARTING TO GET GOOD AND THEN U ENDED IT. ANYWAY U HAVE GOT TO UPDATE SOON. FOR MY SAKE OF BEING HUMAN. I DONT LIVE THAT LONG AND I PLAN TO READ THE REST OF THIS FICT BUT THE OF MY TEEN YEARS. I REALLY LIKED IT, HOW U CROSSED THE TWO ANIME TOGETHER WAS PURE GENIOUS. LOVED IT AND WISH TO READ MORE. I JUST WISH THAT THER ARE MORE BAN/KAG OR KEN/KAG OUT THERE. ANYWAY ENOUGH OF ME RANTING GOT TO LOVE IT THOUGH. GOOD LUCK! MAY KAMI-SAMA BE WITH YOU. GOT TO UPDATE SOON U GOT THAT.(HEHE) OH AND I AM TO LAZY TO LOGIN, SO I PUT (MM)BESIDE ME NAME. GOOD LUCK.
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Reviewed By: kylya On: February 03, 2005 16:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this story! Are all the chapters going to be this long? I like these really long chapters though, they really satisfy you in away. I love the way you write. You don't over describe things, which I like a lot! Over describing things get on my nerves. You leave plenty to the imagination.:)
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