| "What Exactly Is Involved In A Saiyan Mating Ritual?" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: mizu megami [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2002 22:06 CST
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ARG!!!! you left it why did you leave it and at such an interesting point...your too good a cliff hangers.
wish there was more,
:)mizu:P |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl On: March 21, 2002 19:59 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How dare Vegeta, working poor Bulma up like that...wish it was me! Another great chappy! Update when you can! |
Reviewed By: Dark Jades [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2002 17:42 CST
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Love it love it love it! Everything's starting to fall into place now and it is truly awesome! I can't think of anything else to say about it that would do justice, so I'll leave it at that! |
Reviewed By: Saijin Bulma [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2002 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy dragon Balls! I can't wait to see how this ends. What is Vegeta going to do?! EEP! And of course, the moment we all are hoping for, when are they gonna do it! Teehee, I guess that's just lil' perverted me thinking. *evil snicker* Good job Ember, you write exceptional fanfiction! Can't wait to post this on my site!! |
Reviewed By: Faded Lush [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2002 16:20 CST
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Gomen! I didn't mean for that to be posted twice! My computer is being retarded. ~_~ |
Reviewed By: Faded Lush [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2002 16:18 CST
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I loved it! I really liked the look back to their first meeting, it was wonderfuly done. I hope you write more soon, I just love this story!! |
Reviewed By: Faded Lush [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2002 16:17 CST
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I loved it! I really liked the look back to their first meeting, it was wonderfuly done. I hope you write more soon, I just love this story!! |
Reviewed By: Saiya-jin44 On: March 21, 2002 15:09 CST
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this is SOOOOOOOO awesome as usual dear. ^_^ you're amazing! i know i know...i'm behind haha. but this is just great. i love the emphasis on Vegeta's thoughts. so rarely do we get to see into his silly mind. ~_^ hehe keep up the great work girl!! i'll talk to ya soon! |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2002 14:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
After reading chp.14, I was this close of having a heat wave. Please keep it up. |
Reviewed By: valeyard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 12, 2002 07:10 CST
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Evil place to leave it Ember!
Hee hee! Loved it! Got to be the best B/V get together ever written:-) |
Reviewed By: crystalnight On: March 12, 2002 15:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!! you have got to UPDATE!!!! NOW!!!! this is such a great fic!! i love it!! its the best!! omg, you have to write more!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Faded Lush [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2002 12:10 CST
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That was good! I was waiting for a darker chapter to appear. My only real complaint is that you don't post often enough! ^_^ I love reading your work!! Je ne! |
Reviewed By: Carbunkl [MediaMiner Member] On: March 04, 2002 09:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You know, Vegeta isn't the only screwed up one, they both are. |
Reviewed By: Ryoko-onee On: March 03, 2002 19:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was sad and touching. (sniffle) That was his mom wasn't it? Poor Vegeta. That poor baby...
I hope you write more soon. |
Reviewed By: Vampiric_Angel [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2002 15:48 CST
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very nice chapter. This one has been written in more common english therby making is easier to read. I think the borders between now and then arent that clear, and I miss Bulma, but i think its certainly a very good chapter... and i like them dark! |
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