| "What Exactly Is Involved In A Saiyan Mating Ritual?" Reviews/Comments [ 169 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kris On: January 24, 2002 16:51 CST
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Why?!?! Why did you end it there?? You and you're evil cliffhangers!! You have to post more soon...either here or on ffn. I have to know what the Ko-oni-jin elders plan for Vegeta! |
Reviewed By: catgirl26 On: January 22, 2002 16:59 CST
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GAH! EVIL EVIL EVIL CLIFFHANGER!!!! Well, now you have to write faster, so I can see what's going to happen! Damn! I have to study for Bio tonight, and I'm going to keep thinking about what's gonna happen...And ya know, I'm sure the supreme interest rating of Nephrons and Glycosis will just keep me riveted to my binder...*sigh* How I hate final exams...But anwyay, Great chapter! I loved it! |
Reviewed By: karak On: January 22, 2002 16:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You really have to read hte one before this again to make sure you know what the writer is talking about. Also there was a part where i got very confused who the writer meant, but certainly very very nice to read. Making you feel comfert, angst and then comfert and fear again as you are lured deeper into the caves and the story! I want more! |
Reviewed By: Kaiya On: January 22, 2002 15:44 CST
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I love this fic Ember!!! This chapter was no disapointment! I can't wait for the next chapter! So, until then, ja ne! |
Reviewed By: gokusgirl [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2002 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How exciting! Hurry with an update soon! |
Reviewed By: Pareathe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2002 07:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man, I wish they let you put a # 11 on enjoyment factor on here, this fanfic is the best ever! I've been reading it on FF.net, but since it was down again (surprise, surprise) I caught it here. I am dying to know what happened to Bulma, and what's gonna happen to poor Vegita? Wheeee can't wait for more! Hope you get it together really soon! |
Reviewed By: Mar [MediaMiner Member] On: January 22, 2002 07:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Well this is an interesting story. Please keep going. |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 22, 2002 04:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OH NNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! NOT ANOTHER CLIFFY??? You must update asap. What happened to Bulma? What's gonna happen to Vegeta? And what the hell does Kandai have up his sleeve? I'll be on a respirator waiting for the next chapter!!! |
Reviewed By: Kibikibi_chan On: January 16, 2002 19:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DO IT FOR SEX!! that was halarious! keep up the good work!hehehe..^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kibikibi_chan On: January 16, 2002 17:12 CST
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that is sooo sad!! the fic is great so far!u write really well! can't wait fot more!^_^ |
Reviewed By: Susan On: January 08, 2002 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter. Glad to see that Bulma wasn't hurt. Can't wait to read what happens next. Peace |
Reviewed By: mizu megami On: January 04, 2002 16:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
| Reviewed By: Susan On: December 16, 2001 08:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't believe Veggie would do something like that. He needs a chill pill and I need to read the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: selena281 On: December 11, 2001 09:56 CST
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you get a big fat 10, imo!!!! keep writing, your storyline and way of writing are great! ^_^
(i can't wait to see what else is involved in the ritual...) |
Reviewed By: Annie On: December 08, 2001 00:15 CST
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I tell you what, wow! You are even more wordy than Charles Dickens. But it's beautiful, darling, beautiful! |
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