| "Andora's Secret" Reviews/Comments [ 2 ] |
Reviewed By: Loozer Artist Joker [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2002 02:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
eh I'm working on more, and my grammar and spelling sucks X_x; |
Reviewed By: fruitloop #1 [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2002 13:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You should write more. 0 0 wow was that good. I only notaced one or two spelling errors, and once when you switched from past to present tense.
do you plan on writing more chapters? I'd love to see more! |
