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| "Walking a mile in someone elses shoes" Reviews/Comments [ 3 ] | Title: Ah.
Reviewed By: MizuYume [MediaMiner Member] On: February 18, 2005 01:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 6 of 10 Comment/Review:
Work on your spelling, some of it was hard to follow, check your grammar, etc, etc. I like the idea, but... Kayla? I thought they were JAPANESE.
| Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2005 09:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 2 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author.
| Reviewed By: The Master [MediaMiner Member] On: February 09, 2005 09:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love chapter 1 it was great. Keep up the great work. You are a great author. How about Usagi and Kim Possible.
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