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Reviewed By: baka_kitsune [MediaMiner Member] On: March 15, 2006 18:18 CST
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Hey. I've been following your story for quite some time now. I just wanted to say that I can't wait for you to come back and post again. It seems as though most of my favorite authors have suddenly vanished, but I faith that they will return...eventually. I await your update patiently, and I how all is well with your life. -BK
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Reviewed By: Inuyoukaimama [MediaMiner Member] On: August 10, 2005 23:41 CDT
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I love this story... I loved it the first time I read it posted quite some time ago. I'm so pleased that I get to re-read it during your edits! This one really stuck with me... and I have shared it with a few friends. I hope they enjoy it as much as I did and am enjoying it again. I also found your planned sequel... I can't wait until you start working on that again! Very nice job!
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Title: Absolutely well done
Reviewed By: Dianara Darkraven [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2005 08:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your view on Sesshoumaru's primal urges is definitely unique. Although I saw his responses as more of something I would accept from a wolf, not persay a dog demon. That's only my point of view on it. Yours is wonderous, and the ideal of him losing control on such a level interesting to say the least. I definitely have this one on favorites and am anxiously awaiting an update! Dianara
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Reviewed By: MeefMonster On: July 07, 2005 14:16 CDT
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*drool drool pant pant* keep writing girlfriend
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Title: FFRG Review
Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 14:09 CDT
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Thank you for submitting to FFRG. I have read the first chapter and find it to be an easy read with distinct style. As far as grammar is concerned I find no glaring mistakes, however there are a few spots that could use a little more smoothing to prevent the rough spots from stifling the flow of the story. While there are a few minor errors in the first couple of paragraphs, the first full sentence that causes a stumble in your flow is this one: "Being pulled through the well had always brought butterflies to her stomach time out of mind but this feeling of being ripped away was like a knife in her gut." With the aid of a thorough beta many of these minor glitches can easily be fixed. The concept and the set up of your storyline are solid and believable. Keeping Sesshoumaru reticent and introverted is good for keeping him in character, which you have done well. Your skill in explaining his reasons for assimilation, his current behavior, and Kagome's tangible melancholy are some of the better aspects of this chapter. As a whole I believe that your distinct writing style, setup and plot seeds have provided the recipe for a very interesting tale. Keep up the good work! ~futekioosha~
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Reviewed By: Rhiara (not signed in) On: June 22, 2005 23:22 CDT
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I really enjoyed this story... like another reviewer said I think it's one of the more believable SessKag stories. Update update update!
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Reviewed By: phoenixburns [MediaMiner Member] On: June 21, 2005 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that this is the best take on the Sess/Kag relationship I've seen so far. It seems so much more believable. I hope you continue since I was heartbroken when I realized I read all that was available.
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Title: FFARG Review
Reviewed By: xfiledino [MediaMiner Member] On: June 17, 2005 23:22 CDT
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Ok, first off you had me very confused from the start. "...side, in this time, away from her friends, away from her..." In this sentence Kagome is the center of the paragraph, you know I think I get this sentence now after reading it out of the actual story. But when I was reading it, it made me very confused. I was starting to think that she was sad over loosing Sango? or some other female character. The next confusing thing was that you mention a kiss between Kagome and InuYasha, yet in the sentences before that I came to the conclusion that they were just standing there talking to each other. Other than that, I think this was a very good start to what could be a very interesting piece. Thank you for submitting this to the FFARG!!
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Title: Sapphire
Reviewed By: moonsiren06 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2005 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG i have no clue why u have only 7 reviews on this site but this story was sooooooo amazing i loved it! it had so much emotion and ...... I just loved it! ur a great writer i hope this isent the end of the fic cause after all that i wanna know if they make it through. sapphire
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Reviewed By: AngelHeart212 On: May 31, 2005 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed this story very much. I wish Kagome hadn't cried every five seconds but that's just me. That aside I think this story was very well written and enjoyable. It had me close to tears at times (that is saying a lot) and had me laughing also. I hope you continue to write.
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Title: Elsewhere
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2005 16:01 CDT
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Reviewed By: Alba On: March 22, 2005 19:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I must say, this is probably the best sess/kag fic I've ever read. I wish I could have put a 20 on the enjoyment factor! There is nothing wrong with this story, your word use and characterizations are as close to perfect as I've ever seen! Very very very good job on this fic, it's a masterpiece
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Title: Elsewhere
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 14:37 CST
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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: WOW.....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn (nsi sry) On: February 20, 2005 04:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow that was just wow i cant find a way to describe it! just wow..... well keep up your good work in everything you do i hope you sucess in everything you write..... just wow please dont say that was the end of this extrodanary fic?
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Title: awww....
Reviewed By: InuYashasLoveLorn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 17, 2005 20:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think you should just let Kagome get what's coming to her and have her mate Sesshy! ^__^ well anywho keep up the good work and what ever happend to Kouga she never asked about him? i would however like to kno! so UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!
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