Reviewed By: gddsinferno On: February 23, 2005 16:51 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really liked your story. You were very descriptive of surroundings and actions. Also kept me the reader guessing what was going to happen. The only problem I had with your fic was the story line was colored in grey which made it a little hard to read. Other that that I truthfully enjoyed your story and hope to see you write more with this type of writing style.
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