| "Needing and Wanting are Two very Different things." Reviews/Comments [ 8 ] |
Title: It's Me again!!
Reviewed By: RamenLuver88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 14, 2006 21:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hay, i'm back to pester you. This story is good to but i love the story Light In The Darkness that you are working on. So I HOPE you continue ALL your storys. THANKS.
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: RamenLuver88 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 11, 2006 22:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
marijang69 is right your paragraphs are great , i'm in love with all of your storys. you have to continue the story it's great!
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Reviewed By: marijang69 [MediaMiner Member] On: June 23, 2005 18:36 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please update! your story is awesome! and your paragraphs are TOTALLY fine! keep up the fantastic work!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 18:42 CST
Comment/Review:
Go and look at how Terri Botta formatted her story "The Lucky Ones". Here is the URL: http://www.mediaminer.org/fanfic/view_st.php/54993 if you need it. Notice how she aligned all her paragraphs to the left and skipped a line between paragraphs? That makes it easier to read on a computer screen. Copy her format and your story will be easier to read and more people will read it. I hope this helps.
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Title: Thankyou!!
Reviewed By: Lonely_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 17:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Howdy!! Thanks for telling me how screwed up my format is!I need to know these things so i can make it easier for you guys!Please send in any more suggestions! Lots of Love!
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Reviewed By: w_j [MediaMiner Member] On: March 03, 2005 16:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Hello, It would be helpful for your readers if you create more paragraphs and do not center your story on the page. The text is too jumbled together to read easily as you have it now. Thanks.
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Title: animedorkette
Reviewed By: animedorkette [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 21:08 CST
Comment/Review:
this is very good !! please oh please update soon, I cant wait to find out what happens!!! please!!!
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Reviewed By: frenchdiamond_1 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 02, 2005 08:31 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to know what happens next. I wonder why Kagome acts that way and how Inu will respond. Hmmmm... Please update soon. Later
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