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Title: So Good!
Reviewed By: Lady-of-broken-shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was INCREDIBLE! You are a genious. The whole idea was really creative in this context, kinda MPreg, but... NOT! Really good lemons.
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Reviewed By: Lady-of-broken-shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant! I love the title, 'XX Factor', named after the X chromosone, i presume? Anyways, this story kicked serious but, and im so sorry to hear about your stressful job. I'm still in school so i wouldn't know... Amy x
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Reviewed By: kagomegirl21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh i liked this!! it was so kawaii!! i think that yugi definately needs to get pregnant now. after all his whining and the fact he was going gaga over asuka just confirms that he needs a baby with yami.
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Title: Sorry ‘bout dying around chp 8.
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, life gets crazy. *Reads the self insert part.* As you have seen. Eeeee . . that had to have sucked. You have my sympathy. Still, the lemons were worth the wait, and I'm glad to see it all ended happily ever after. So, I nice little 'What If' fic where Yugi goes through what Jou went through? Oh dear, now I'll have something else I'll need to follow. ^.^ Makes me wonder if we will be watch Yami's fantasy, or a Yugi dream/nightmare . . . or, something completely different. Any way it goes down, I'll be sure to follow. Good luck with your bunnies!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 15:31 CDT
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^_^ Very nice wedding, so very kawaii. And the lemon was brilliant, smokin' hot and sexy!!! *coughs* Anyway, what was Yami thinking? And I don't think Pocky really contributes to obesity... unless you've been eating a really BIG pack for a REALLY long time. And if it was the chocolate-and-almonds kind... Mmm, Pocky... =^.^= Um, cya!!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 11:49 CDT
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Poor Yami...I almost pity him, it seems like Yugi is PMSing and he's left to deal with that...if not for the fact he's seriously considering trying to get Yugi pregnant...LOL You should though, just to see what happens. Update this soon, I just can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 21:41 CDT
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You had to do research? Hmmm...interesting research, eh? NANI!? Joey was still lactating...? That was kinda funny though, really funny in fact. This is such a good story, I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: David F [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, though I kind of hoped Joey would've stayed as a woman. Still it's a great read, one of the best I've reads I've ever had.
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter! Get to the lemon you whore! (Pardon the french) I'm a lemon whore myself...with a story this good the lemon must be amazing! I can't wait for the update! LOVE IT A LOT!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 11:09 CST
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Totally coolness! I absolutely love this story!
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Reviewed By: 1reallyblue1 On: March 29, 2005 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this! the whole angsty few chapters really set the story up nicely so that we could really appreciate the marrage/baby. will you continue writing this through the ceremony and honeymoon? thanks a ton for doing this.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 17:32 CST
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Hm, very interesting story. It [B]REALLY[/B] reminds me of that story called "It Started With Snow", where Jou's pregnant also but he's still a boy. Anyway, Jou's pretty... violent for an emotional pregnant girl. And I know this sounds petty, but you keep on calling Jou "he" even though he's temporarily a "she". Anyway, can't wait for the real wedding, it's going to be awesome.
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So fricken cool! And you didn't do the two token pushes and a baby scream. You did it woonderfully! Good job and I can't wait for your update! (Although one thing, you named the kid awful quick after it was born and neither Jou nor Seto said it...just saying...unless I missed it being chosen earlier...sorry if I did!) Loved the chapter anyways, it was amazin! This was amazing! LOVED IT! Jou nursing was so cute! This was fricken adorable!
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Reviewed By: Miss Demonic One [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. That made me cringe. That sounded painful, but hurry up and write the next chapter, I want Joey to be turned back into a boy. That chapter made me cry at the end. I can't believe I read that in my school. Keep writing.
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Jodine16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 07:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*rotflmao* OMG!!! that last paragraph was FUNNY!!! I'm so happy I'm taking the easy way to parenthood and am adopting. Update soon, I want to read Joey's Big Day.
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Reviewed By: Miss Demonic One [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2005 14:27 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was soooooooooo sweet. and I think Joey would be a good mommy, I am writing a story where Yami and Yugi have a daughter that looks alot like Yami. Great story. Keep writing
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Title: chapter 8
Reviewed By: Shinigami24 On: March 21, 2005 11:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*cackles sinsterly* Pls update this! And, Joey, the best revenge on Bakura and Marik would be to turn one of them into a girl and use fertility potion, and instant pregnancy! *evil laughter* As for Yugi, pls get him pregnant!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 18, 2005 13:10 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so fricken cute! I'm so amazed at how adorable this is! KAWAII! Update soon, this is awsome! (Get Yugi pregnant, just because...)
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Title: Heya!
Reviewed By: Sisco [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 21:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awe!! This is such a cool fic! I can't wait to read more...and more! o.o XD Joey is going to be so cute as a mommy! ^o^
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 17, 2005 17:35 CST
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So adorable! I love it, it's great and hilarious! So sweet, so cute! ARGH! This is hot!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2005 17:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is so fricken cute! And wouldn't it be a little less than nine months, hasn't at least a week or two passed now? (Sorry, I'm kinda picky about that...being a woman and all...) Counting down...Tee hee... I can't wait for your update! Go you!
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: March 12, 2005 21:25 CST
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Um . . . point 3 was the only thing I was confused on. Thank you for that, and I'll just go crawling back into the shadows now. Sorry! ^^;; This is still wonderful . . . Yep, I have no constructive criticism to offer. *Slinks away into the shadows.*
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 19:27 CST
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I love the food cravings the best! I think they're so creative and weird and wonderful! You're so great at this story, never mind how research like it sounds. Good job with the chatper!
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Reviewed By: Jodine16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 16:43 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
'Pregnant'and'Joey-puppy' do NOT mix, but somehow you have managed to and we're all proud of you...[{Some-Rabid-Seto-Kaiba-Fan-Girl: I feel sorry for Seto-sama!! :'(}] UPDATE SOON!!!
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Reviewed By: WannabeKoushiro [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2005 09:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, this is so fun! I just love everything you're putting Joey through so far. I especially love all the beatings Seto is getting. I normally don't like him, and I usually dislike this couple, but this is a very unique situation written in a humorous and charming way.
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Title: So . . . very . . . evil . . .
Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: March 11, 2005 21:55 CST
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You evil, hentai, wicked, person you! Do you have any idea how much I love you for your writing naughtiness? O.o Wait . . . never mind, that wasn't grammarly possible. But I still love your writings. So you're going to continue this, yes? Then I must read, and laugh at the fury of a hormonal-female-Jou. The more he beats on Kaiba, the more I laugh. Now you did clear up the whole bleeding thing, but then you promptly dug yourself back into a hole. Now if you have found/do find anything to the contrary, feel free to dismiss the following: Once a woman starts bleeding, she can't get pregnant for that cycle (maybe in the first few hours, but come on, the egg is getting flushed too). You insinuated that Jou & Seto have only had sex once. Given that sperm can only live 24 hours max, and Jou had been bleeding for a few days (he was still bleeding when they made love, right?), I find it hard that he got pregnant that time. But if I'm wrong, then could you spell it out for me, pretty please? I'm sorry for not understanding what happened. ;_;
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2005 17:58 CST
Comment/Review:
Love it! It's awsome!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 20:30 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Super uber cruel person indeed! Geeze...I can't believe you wrote that, (but deep down inside, I'm giggling maddly (on the outside as well) and I'm glad you did!) I can't wait for you to UPDATE!
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Reviewed By: Jodine16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 10, 2005 06:59 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You had SO better update this fic soon!! It's so funny^^ and I want to see what happens to Joey!
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Reviewed By: HappyDragon(logged out) On: March 10, 2005 03:43 CST
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You're evil, you updated as I posted my review for chapters 1&2. I read chp 2, and 3 wasn't even up yet. Refresh my inbox, and there it is. Evil I say, evil. And that's why I love you, which is very bad. But what can you do about bad habits? *Reads part 3* Yes . . . . highly cruel. And how did that happen if he was still bleeding? *CLicks in that he stayed for a month or so, so they probably had "fun" when he wasn't bleeding* . . Nevermind . . . I liked this, but I still feel for Jou. And the image of Kaiba being knock on his ass by a pissed off female Jou shall remain in my heart always.
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