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Title: So Good!
Reviewed By: Lady-of-broken-shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2007 16:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was INCREDIBLE! You are a genious. The whole idea was really creative in this context, kinda MPreg, but... NOT! Really good lemons.
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Reviewed By: Lady-of-broken-shadows [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2007 12:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant! I love the title, 'XX Factor', named after the X chromosone, i presume? Anyways, this story kicked serious but, and im so sorry to hear about your stressful job. I'm still in school so i wouldn't know... Amy x
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Reviewed By: kagomegirl21 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2006 12:28 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
heh i liked this!! it was so kawaii!! i think that yugi definately needs to get pregnant now. after all his whining and the fact he was going gaga over asuka just confirms that he needs a baby with yami.
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Title: Sorry ‘bout dying around chp 8.
Reviewed By: HappyDragon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 27, 2005 00:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, life gets crazy. *Reads the self insert part.* As you have seen. Eeeee . . that had to have sucked. You have my sympathy. Still, the lemons were worth the wait, and I'm glad to see it all ended happily ever after. So, I nice little 'What If' fic where Yugi goes through what Jou went through? Oh dear, now I'll have something else I'll need to follow. ^.^ Makes me wonder if we will be watch Yami's fantasy, or a Yugi dream/nightmare . . . or, something completely different. Any way it goes down, I'll be sure to follow. Good luck with your bunnies!
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: April 21, 2005 15:31 CDT
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^_^ Very nice wedding, so very kawaii. And the lemon was brilliant, smokin' hot and sexy!!! *coughs* Anyway, what was Yami thinking? And I don't think Pocky really contributes to obesity... unless you've been eating a really BIG pack for a REALLY long time. And if it was the chocolate-and-almonds kind... Mmm, Pocky... =^.^= Um, cya!!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2005 11:49 CDT
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Poor Yami...I almost pity him, it seems like Yugi is PMSing and he's left to deal with that...if not for the fact he's seriously considering trying to get Yugi pregnant...LOL You should though, just to see what happens. Update this soon, I just can't wait!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 10, 2005 21:41 CDT
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You had to do research? Hmmm...interesting research, eh? NANI!? Joey was still lactating...? That was kinda funny though, really funny in fact. This is such a good story, I can't wait for more!
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Reviewed By: David F [MediaMiner Member] On: April 06, 2005 01:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, though I kind of hoped Joey would've stayed as a woman. Still it's a great read, one of the best I've reads I've ever had.
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 12:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good chapter! Get to the lemon you whore! (Pardon the french) I'm a lemon whore myself...with a story this good the lemon must be amazing! I can't wait for the update! LOVE IT A LOT!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2005 11:09 CST
Comment/Review:
Totally coolness! I absolutely love this story!
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Reviewed By: 1reallyblue1 On: March 29, 2005 17:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this! the whole angsty few chapters really set the story up nicely so that we could really appreciate the marrage/baby. will you continue writing this through the ceremony and honeymoon? thanks a ton for doing this.
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Reviewed By: Black Angel Reaper [MediaMiner Member] On: March 27, 2005 17:32 CST
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Hm, very interesting story. It [B]REALLY[/B] reminds me of that story called "It Started With Snow", where Jou's pregnant also but he's still a boy. Anyway, Jou's pretty... violent for an emotional pregnant girl. And I know this sounds petty, but you keep on calling Jou "he" even though he's temporarily a "she". Anyway, can't wait for the real wedding, it's going to be awesome.
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Reviewed By: Crystal56 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 21:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So fricken cool! And you didn't do the two token pushes and a baby scream. You did it woonderfully! Good job and I can't wait for your update! (Although one thing, you named the kid awful quick after it was born and neither Jou nor Seto said it...just saying...unless I missed it being chosen earlier...sorry if I did!) Loved the chapter anyways, it was amazin! This was amazing! LOVED IT! Jou nursing was so cute! This was fricken adorable!
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Reviewed By: Miss Demonic One [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 14:04 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG. That made me cringe. That sounded painful, but hurry up and write the next chapter, I want Joey to be turned back into a boy. That chapter made me cry at the end. I can't believe I read that in my school. Keep writing.
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Title: Chapter 9
Reviewed By: Jodine16 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 22, 2005 07:42 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*rotflmao* OMG!!! that last paragraph was FUNNY!!! I'm so happy I'm taking the easy way to parenthood and am adopting. Update soon, I want to read Joey's Big Day.
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