| "The Ultimate Friendship: Vegeta and Pan- Goku Saga" Reviews/Comments [ 15 ] |
Reviewed By: serendipity [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2002 21:50 CDT
Comment/Review:
This one is probably my fav Ultimate Friendship; Pan & Vegeta one. ^_^ The whole Pan/Trunk/Marron thing is sweet/funny. |
Reviewed By: SMiler2K2 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2002 19:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked this one alot better than the baby saa. Maybe because Yamcha finally got his ass whooped and Goku's back. Even though I'm more of a Gohan or Trunks fan. |
Reviewed By: cat On: February 04, 2002 14:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey, this is a very good fic. it's quite well written, and is funny and creative. good job! i'm gonna go read the sequel now! |
Reviewed By: Indira On: January 07, 2002 14:55 CST
Comment/Review:
FINALY! the next chappie!!
THANKS |
Reviewed By: indira from Holland On: January 04, 2002 06:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like your story, please write more!
Only Vegeta is deffinitely NOT nice to Bulma.
(poor Bulma)
And I would love to read an Trunks/Pan fic.
kisses from Indira from Holland! |
Reviewed By: Brenda On: December 30, 2001 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great next chapter! It makes my day to find you have a new chapter up! |
Reviewed By: jeeva On: January 21, 2002 18:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a great story. Thanks for finishing it. Can't wait for the next saga. You are the greatest writer. I can't wait! |
Reviewed By: ? On: December 13, 2001 20:58 CST
Comment/Review:
hurry up with the next chap! |
Reviewed By: v & J On: December 13, 2001 20:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi,
It is a good stroy to spend a time. I really enjoyed it. Thanks for it. Anyway, finish the story pls. I want more fics about vegita and pan in future.
Good luck |
Reviewed By: Jen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2001 02:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think everyone should read this! I've never seen another story quite like it and its GREAT!
Oops, I almost forgot (hehe). You're welcome! |
Reviewed By: Jen [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2001 00:21 CST
Comment/Review:
Pleeeeeeeeeeease update soooooooon. I'm looking forward to it. |
Reviewed By: Brenda On: December 01, 2001 17:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love this series. I look forward to where you may go next. I have always loved Vegeta and Pans relationship in this series and the one before and I hope it continues right up thru adulthood.
email me please when you add more.
bkerrmom1@earthlink.net |
Reviewed By: Hotohori4life On: November 29, 2001 11:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely love these "Pan and Vegeta" sagas!!
Please hurry up and write more!! I LOVED the previous one, and I'm hoping that you'll write one
with Trunks and Pannie, when they get in their teens,( I call her that. Can you make Trunks & everyone else call her that? Just to get on her nerves.) and Vegeta decides that Pan is the only suitable quarter-human for the new Prince of all Saiyans!!! Until then, more!! |
Reviewed By: yuriko* On: November 19, 2001 02:39 CST
Comment/Review:
good story start getting to the summoning of Goku part though please. :) |
Reviewed By: Jen On: November 20, 2001 18:33 CST
Comment/Review:
Great story! By the way AU stands for Alternate Universe. |
