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| "Loves Consequences" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] | Reviewed By: crimsontears69 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2005 21:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
good stuff!! i would like to read more!!
| Reviewed By: A anime fan girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 18:44 CDT
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oh, gosh i meant in my review! lol. this is getting annoying!
| Reviewed By: A anime fan girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 18:43 CDT
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Dang typos! I hate them!!!! K, the typos are (and im sure u noe them, too, arein "but hey,", forget, I meant reviews, and for volleyball practice. k, bye!
| Reviewed By: A anime fan girl [MediaMiner Member] On: June 18, 2005 18:38 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey! This story has a good feel to it, and I really like it. I've only read the first chapter, and it's going well. I think that Sessh/Rin fic are so0o0o cute! lol. The lemon was kinda short, ut hey, I'm not complainin, mine's probably too!lol. What I'm askin is... wut's with the title? Ya noe, foeget I asked that, I guess I'll find dat out in the story! Man, i've read ur recent review, and, man, some of them were mean. Mean people, leave her alone, it's her first fic! lol, K, well, ill read the next chapter some other time, I have to leave foe volleyball pratice. Bye!
| Reviewed By: Lucient [MediaMiner Member] On: May 21, 2005 08:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I like Ru/Rin pairings. I prefer the 3rd person ominpotent POV the best. You tend to let loose and let the words flow when you write from that POV. I'm not sure how you can break your hymen training. Maybe she should just be dirty and tell him she was playing with the hilt of his sword or something. LOL. I'm more of a perv than you, lol. Rin and Ru have not yet done anything in my fan fic, but they will soon. You should come read what Sessh does with his first love. I think it's in CH3, but I think you would appreciate it, being a Sessh love making writer too. I'd like if you continued your fic, and I will be back to read more of it when you update. :)
| Reviewed By: hroluvr315 On: May 20, 2005 06:17 CDT
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hey this isn't bad at all. the only suggestion I would say is to make the lemons longer and more descriptive. The fic is very nice so don't worry about it ur a good writer.
| Reviewed By: Black_Rose28 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 04, 2005 19:46 CDT
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sorry i think i made alot of spelling errors...
| Title: ummmm
Reviewed By: AmonLover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 20:48 CDT
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yeah go back and edit because there a lot of Mistakes and umm stick to the Story no comment in the middle of the damm thing put them in the Being and end okay
| Reviewed By: Kuramas gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: April 03, 2005 12:43 CDT
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Er, you're gonna make more chapters of it so don't check for updates? uh...that made no sence. But I like the fic. So, I'm gonna ask for an update anyways. k, well, bye. ^_^
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