| "Digimon Worlds: Dimensional Endgame" Reviews/Comments [ 24 ] |
Title: Digimon Worlds: Dimensional Endgame
Reviewed By: King Kamakazie [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2008 03:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have read all the chapters that you have posted and all I can say is wow! Also I would like to point out that it has been since 2005 that there has been a new chapter put up for this AWESOME story and I would be honored if you could attempt to finish the story soon I love the way it is progressing! As I said I have read all 27 chapters and trust me it took me about 3 days to do so but on the other hand it was three days that I couldn't sleep due to the fact that I was so deeply hooked to the story that I MUST see the story come to an end with an actual THE END at said end not leave us hanging as it is now.
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Title: I need to ask you a question
Reviewed By: Crossoverlover [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2007 07:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
First of all I am enjoying your different crossover stories and I hope you add to them all soon. Second, after reading them, I got an idea to do my own story and I just wanted to ask if I could use your ideas for Sailor scouts and Interdimentional warriors. I am coming up with the minions for the Dark Alliance but could you give me an idea for a boss unless I can use the one you already devised. I look forward to your answer to my request as soon as possible. I will as for your e-mail so I can send my story to you so you can read over it. Until then see you soon.
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Reviewed By: matn90 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2005 14:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was an excellent chapter! Happy Hanukkah, Merry Kringle, Happy Cristmas, Merry New Year! Later.
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Reviewed By: Sharpshooter On: November 14, 2005 17:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your story is amazing. A classic, try a chapter where davis and kari get trapped somewhere with their kids to bond. but nice idea with future kids. P.S. i hope you update your other stories to soon. like digidestinied of minerva, great story. good luck.
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Reviewed By: Dark Qiviut [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2005 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for not reviewing, G.O.T.H. I was very busy doing fanfics and art. Once more, very good work. I liked the creativity in here. I liked how you intertwined ith both dimensions. And good work on the enticement of the dark characters. Very good work, Gallantmon. Keep it up... P.S.: Maybe you can have the dark characters win a few battles later on in the story. That way, the story becomes a little more balanced. Just a suggestion here. See ya next time!!
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Reviewed By: TK Styles [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2005 00:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
And the True Face of this Evil is Revealed. Good chapter. Keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next chapter. Peace.
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Title: Nice
Reviewed By: TK Styles [MediaMiner Member] On: October 01, 2005 05:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nice twists in this chapter. Not much else to say except keep up the good work. I eagerly await the next chapter. Peace.
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Reviewed By: TK Styles [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2005 03:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have been a fan of your writings since you first started all the way back with I think it was your Tamers/Little Mermaid story. But I didn't really get into your work until you started your Davis-centric stories. Sadly I think this is my first time reviewing your work. It is always good to see someone write not Davis in a good light but with a fairly decent consideration to all the chacters. I'm glad that even through your problems on other sites you are still around writing. Keep up the good work. I've just begun my own, multi-chaptered Davis-centric work. The main coupling is Daiyako at the moment but their will be plenty Daikari later. Check it out if you have time. Review if you liked it or didn't like it. If you though it was just terrible e-mail me and tell me why so I can improve. Anyway, great work, I think out of all your stories this one may be my favorite. Keep on writing. Peace.
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Reviewed By: Jesse1 On: August 28, 2005 12:44 CDT
Comment/Review:
Are these Zodiac Sailor Scouts going to be ant thing like Knights of the Zodiac?
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Reviewed By: Dark Qiviut [MediaMiner Member] On: August 11, 2005 17:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once more, very nice chapter. We finally see the Orichalos (how do you spell that again?). Very nice, and I'm glad you didn't bash J.P. He's a good kid with a good heart. Good thing you didn't. However, my only bugger was that the other children aren't getting that much attention. I think you should give the other children some time to shine. However, that's just me. Anyway, good work. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Jesse1 On: August 10, 2005 12:55 CDT
Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Dark Qiviut [MediaMiner Member] On: July 29, 2005 14:18 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch. 17 was pretty nice. I like the interludes and the taunts. The flashbacks were also interesting. While this is a good chapter, I have a little complaint here. I suggest that you treat J.P. and the other characters a little more fairly in the future chapters. Other than that, really nice work. Keep it up. P.S.: Do you think you can incluse the Pokemon and Cardcaptor Sakura casts in this story?
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Reviewed By: shadow of miracles On: July 26, 2005 12:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Like I said before I really like all the stories you ever wrote this one is another great story you have to update soon and maybe you can help me on my story just e-mail me.
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Reviewed By: Dark Qiviut [MediaMiner Member] On: July 22, 2005 20:30 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Once more, very good chapter. Ch. 16 was very good. I agree with you reguarding Kari's character, although I never really saw her as a "sugar, spice and everything nice" kind of character. Anyway, this is your opinion, and I completely respect it. Anyway, *ahem* great chapter. Keep it up...
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Reviewed By: Dark Qiviut [MediaMiner Member] On: July 16, 2005 16:09 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch. 15 is really nice work. I enjoyed the fights and explanations involving Kari being adopted. Really good work, Gallantmon. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Dark Qiviut [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2005 19:51 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ch. 14 was quite good. I enjoyed the fight and the introductions to the new characters. It was about darn time that happened. Now, that about everyone is together, I wonder what crazy ideas you'll put in next. Nice work; keep it up.
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Title: Awesome
Reviewed By: Dark Gatomon On: July 09, 2005 23:23 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
sorry about all the ten raings, thats as high as they go. anyway THIS FIC IS AWESOME, I CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!! oh yeah, now do those seven emeralds thier looking for have anything to do with Sonic the Hedgehog, cause i love those games and T.v. show
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Reviewed By: CrossFusion Bass [MediaMiner Member] On: July 07, 2005 04:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Man. just reading this is reminding me of Battle city.Finally someone make Kaiba admit Joey is better.I can't wait til ABC family reruns the season two eps. Go Davis!
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Reviewed By: Dark Qiviut [MediaMiner Member] On: July 06, 2005 20:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yo there, Gallantmon. I just read a lot of your work, and I must say it's been extremely enjoyable. I enjoyed the action and the excitement. You really bring out the fulfillment for me with this remarkable story. Very great story so far. Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2005 17:13 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hi! Sorry about not reviewing. I have been reading your stories, and I only like them more and more. As far as the new villainess, I think I know who you mean. Is it the Negaverse queen? If it is, I can't remember her name.
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Reviewed By: rldelancy [MediaMiner Member] On: June 01, 2005 16:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
never heard of the mew mews but from what you put in this story it is an excellent technique to use. hope to read more soon. by the way, when are you going to put mystic digimon wars up? anyways I will be finally adding the next chapter of Digimon Fantasy 10 today. so thanks for being patient with me.
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Reviewed By: rldelancy [MediaMiner Member] On: May 05, 2005 10:48 CDT
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excellent blending of stories and kudos for bringing sailor saturn back. I hope you continue and agree with the idea of putting tk and either catherine or hotaru together
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Reviewed By: Charmeleon [MediaMiner Member] On: April 20, 2005 11:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a cool story.
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Reviewed By: rldelancy [MediaMiner Member] On: April 18, 2005 20:26 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't think id ever see endgame stories again good job on this so far by the way you did get it wrong but don't worry everybody does it's r l delancy lol
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