| "*Home Alone...Just me & You*" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: B.B. On: January 14, 2007 01:40 CST
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that was so funny. dont leave the readers hangin, you have to write another chapter.
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Reviewed By: DeadlySoulCaster [MediaMiner Member] On: June 15, 2006 20:16 CDT
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I loved it you HAVE to write more I AM BEGGING YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEEEEEEEEAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE or im going to die of not reading what comes next!!!!! I BEG OF YOU TO WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great job, keep up the good work :D
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Title: me.need.more.chapters
Reviewed By: mmm... On: April 23, 2006 05:37 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry.need.more.chapters.asap.me.shall.cry.hurry.now.it.good.fanfic.tank.yo oh.
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 19:14 CST
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p.s why did inu throw the phone back into the pool after he got it out???? and is the phone water proof?????
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Reviewed By: star555555528 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 29, 2006 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
:) i love this story! i really want 2 see wat happewns next. plz update soon it looks as if it has been awhile since u did so if possible could u update by April 5?? thats my b-day :) ok well just update asap!!! love ya, tiffany
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Title: love yaz!
Reviewed By: DarkAngle Shaelyn [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2006 17:18 CST
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WTF DO YOU THINK YOUR DOING KEEP GOING I NEED SOME LEMONS *giggles* look at the hentai i have become...*sigh* n e who i love it please keep on going... *puppie dog eyes* PWEEZ
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Reviewed By: Nami_wave_101 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 16, 2005 16:00 CST
Comment/Review:
MORE CHAPTERS PLEASE!!
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Reviewed By: Just so you know... On: December 14, 2005 12:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
what in the world is a "pica" WOW... did you mean pizza? as in the food with crust sauce cheese and optional toppings? I think you should look over your work again, there were a whole bunch of spelling mistakes it's not "o" it's "Oh"
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Title: how do you get to other chapters?
Reviewed By: Immortal Vengeance On: September 14, 2005 18:24 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was a great fic, but how do I get to the other chapters besides the first??? I am dieing to see what is next:)
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Reviewed By: Michi4 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 12, 2005 00:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey this story has potential. PLZ UPDATE!
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Title: Lyke it
Reviewed By: DarkRoses On: August 15, 2005 12:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I luv it !! Update soon!
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Reviewed By: YashaJunkie On: July 06, 2005 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really hope you update soon it seems like it's going to be a good story, please update!!!!! ;)
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Reviewed By: Full_Blue_Moon [MediaMiner Member] On: June 13, 2005 23:17 CDT
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LOL! OMFG! that was sooooo funny! If u don't write more in the next week...i'm...i'm gonna soo...so hurt u!...yea thats rite hurt u! Garrr! So hurry up and write more!
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Title: Great
Reviewed By: Blue Demon Fame On: May 19, 2005 22:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great, you'v just got to up date soon I am DIEING HERE!
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Reviewed By: IronFang On: May 02, 2005 16:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is to funny phone in the pool, icecream on the head this is going to be hilarious! Update soon please.
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