| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Reviewed By: nicole chich On: July 17, 2007 23:04 PDT
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i really love this story and would appreciate it if you would update soon so me and everyone else has the best sort of entertainment this summer. bye bye i hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: nicole chich On: July 17, 2007 23:04 PDT
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i really love this story and would appreciate it if you would update soon so me and everyone else has the best sort of entertainment this summer. bye bye i hope to read more soon.
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Reviewed By: suelias [MediaMiner Member] On: July 17, 2007 10:58 PDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hate the necklace, love everything else. She's taking him home! Hurray! Now, they will have time to either fall in love o hate each other. And Inuyasha has to brace himself. He will be confronting a very different world to that he's know all his life. A world that probably will be crueler to him. . . And above all he'll have to be prepared for the commotion his ears are going to cause among Kagome's family (his grumpiness doesn't work with mama Higurashi) Poor ears!
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Reviewed By: boredgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 11:52 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
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Crap, in my last comment i gave u a 9 out of a ten! My mistake! gah!
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Reviewed By: boredgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 11:49 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
awsome.....just friggn awsome...can't wait till the next chapter! yay!
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Reviewed By: Chaya_09 [MediaMiner Member] On: July 13, 2007 09:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WONDERFUL STORY!!!!!!!!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!
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Reviewed By: linbee On: July 13, 2007 08:39 PDT
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I love your story. I've been hooked since I read the title and summary. Please tell me its not finished.
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Title: TERRIFIC
Reviewed By: ScifiAmy [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 17:23 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just found your story and I am hooked! I couldn't stop reading and ended up reading until 4:30am this morning. You are a very talented writer. I can't wait read more. I am so enjoying everything you wrote. No flames from me, 'cause seriously there is nothing I can find wrong with your story. I love how Inuyasha now has the necklace and they are heading to her shrine. I wonder what they will do there. Please update soon. I am awaiting at the edge of my seat, and I am almost falling off....
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Reviewed By: Witchlit [MediaMiner Member] On: July 12, 2007 00:37 PDT
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*jumps up nd down n fangirly excitment*.. i freakin love ur story.. i swear im hooked... nd their relationship is so cute.. how his expressions r softening around her... yes.. so adorable... i love ur story.. hope u update soon ^_^... good luck...
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Reviewed By: lil6ter On: July 11, 2007 09:54 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I am so excited to see what happens next. When I first started to read this chapter and when I read the summery, I thought that this would be the end of inuyasha and kagome for a while. I was very happy though when the rosary came into play. I don't think that I will really be able to understand how it will help keep him safe until I see it put into play. Is the concept that because she has this kind of power over him, he is no longer a threat? Also, if they really want to make him look more human they could try filling his nails and maybe if he doesn't want to were the hat they could pin his hair down with close pins or dye his hair. Personally though, I would recommend only filling his nails. I loved this chapter though and I can't wait for the next one go up. This is a great story and you have a great imagination. I can't wait to see the family's reaction to him.
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Reviewed By: Kittenyoukai [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2007 09:40 PDT
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I love it so much. I even added it to my favorites. There's one thing I am wondering though, are you going to still insert Koga in seeing as he was the one who proposed to Kagome and was watching before hand too. It's just a thought/ question though.
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Reviewed By: cwillia [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 22:50 PDT
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This is one of favorite stories, I still think it's so funny that prostituting is seen as a spiritual thing but hey, that's why this story is so intresting. I'm glad that they're leaving together, I wonder what awaits them on the other side and how will everyone react to Inuyasha and more importantly how will he react to them. Kagome better not use those beads nonchalantly either, I always hated seeing her make him "SIT" in the anime for the silliest of reasons. Until next time happy writing.
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Reviewed By: lockedincar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 18:42 PDT
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yay new chappie! it actually shows them starting to trust each other & understand each other even more :) awesome. love the fic
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Reviewed By: JMaxwell [MediaMiner Member] On: July 10, 2007 12:18 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like the story. You certainly explore the struggle for acceptance that Inuyasha faces......intimately. Looking forward to seeing how it ends up.
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Title: Miss
Reviewed By: AviaJade On: July 10, 2007 11:10 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this is the best story i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!
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