| "Shrine Prostitute" Reviews/Comments [ 560 ] |
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Reviewed By: Rinlover [MediaMiner Member] On: November 04, 2006 18:15 PST
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I love this story, it's one of the best lemons I've read in ages. Please update soon! I can't wait to read the next chappie ^^
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Reviewed By: elly86 On: November 02, 2006 23:58 PST
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This story is so hot!! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I Couldn't stop reading!
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Reviewed By: Kirarie1 On: November 02, 2006 23:22 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was sooooo good!!! I haven't read a really great online story in so long and you so just gave me one! Thank You! thank you!!! i have never seen anything quite like this story before and i deeply appreciate your creativity with this story. I feel so sad for the two of them but i'm glad that they found each other. This story really is very original and well done. you should be proud of yourself! ^ ^
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Reviewed By: alakab4m [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2006 19:49 PST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic! it's so interesting and i love how you write. keep up the good work!!
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Reviewed By: Inu's girl On: November 02, 2006 10:20 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoW! I love this fic! It is just been awesome so far and there is so much potential for the rest of the story. I love how long the chapters are and how much the plot is advanced every time. I do hate that we missed 3 of their "sessions" though-grin. Sorry that was the hentai in me. The hopeless romantic is all misty eyed thinking of how kagome could possably rescue Inuyasha from is fate and get to keep him forever like her mother seems to have wanted to do...or did she?! Now that would be interesting. Ha Ha the higurashi women like to test drive their men...okay not so funny but still. Well I'm rambling now and all I wanted to do is tell you how much I'm enjoying your writing. Seriously get around the copy right laws and you could sell this story, sigh o-well. I cant wait for the next chapter! Inu's girl P.S. I wanted to leave you a comment on Adult fanfiction but I didnt see where to leave it. I'm glad I found you here. Okay I'm gone this time...bye...your the greatest...okaybye.
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Reviewed By: redbutterfly21 On: November 01, 2006 23:58 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You portrayed Kagome in a very different light. Usually she is not taken as being so naive and inoccent, however I really like it as the building relationship between her and Inuyasha is very sweet. Just one little flaw-isin't it a bit random for Inuyasha to all of a sudden start havingfeelings for Kagome? Almost directly after he meets her he starts falling in love with her! At least this is how I saw it. Anywhoo, keep updating!! I absolutely love the story so if you continue in a similar vain I will be most happ:)
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Reviewed By: Tarzan14 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 22:46 PST
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aw man please update soon (and the man was totally gender neutral). Just read all of it and majorly addicted and feeling bad for inuyasha. All the emotions and everything..good job. and way glad kagome has an aly in ryu
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2006 09:57 PST
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i adore this story. i can't wait to see what kagome manages to come up with to help inuyasha. i think it's cute that Ryu knows who to schedule her for without even thinking about it!
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Reviewed By: Kix [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2006 14:04 PDT
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aww....there falling inlove!! awsome!
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Reviewed By: john- matthew On: October 15, 2006 19:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Please hurry up and continue the story. i think that you are doing an awesome job!
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Reviewed By: MysteriousAM On: October 15, 2006 13:04 PDT
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Love it, love it, love it! Please keep going with this, because it is a very interesting set up. I hated to stop there! I'll be eagerly looking forward to more!
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Reviewed By: InuyashasBiggestFan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2006 02:49 PDT
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This story is humorous and captivating i love it! Please update soon!!
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Title: Congratulations.
Reviewed By: Kanto The Slayer [MediaMiner Member] On: October 13, 2006 01:26 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfiction meets the K.T.S. Damn Good Fic specifications. One of the few that has recieved all tens, it is considered one of THE fics to read as far as this anime/manga is concerned. This is Sueric-level storytelling, friend. Well done- continue this series or I will eat your brains and finish the story myself.
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Reviewed By: bluezinthos [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2006 15:13 PDT
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i'm lovin' it! what a way to start a relationship...a shy shrine virgin who's there to do as her family wishes and an abused (which is most definetly what our poor hanyou is) shrine prostitute who has never really had anyone care for him. they are so good for each other!
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Reviewed By: frosstyshake(nsi) On: October 12, 2006 13:19 PDT
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Oh I don't care that your a procrastinator,I'm just glad that you updated, and oh what an update!!!!
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