Reviewed By: Selphie Branford [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 17:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
Darling, darling darling! It's cute and all but I can't read it. It's all bunched together and hurts my eyes. I think the idea is good but perhaps you should mess around with your word processor and make a space between every paragraph -- It'll be easier to read. MM.org doesn't do the whole 'separating of the paragraphs' like FF.net, so you have to do that yourself. Oh yeah, and thank you for reading my "Missing Since Monday" fanfiction. I was very discouraged and hadn't written on it since.. God.. I think January or February of this year? You've inspired me to complete it.. Thank you very much for your support. For a while there I thought everyone hated me. ^^;
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