| "Gangstas' Eyes" Reviews/Comments [ 7 ] |
Reviewed By: Sexyblueyes/eric On: September 18, 2006 18:57 CDT
Comment/Review:
Why haven't you responded yet?
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Reviewed By: Sexy Blue Eyes/ eric On: August 18, 2006 18:03 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Look how nice I am to you I gave you all 10's Chapter 18 was a real good chapter! (i'm lying i didnt even read it) Why do they have a spam filter on here do they think I'm high? Maybe I am Is cocaine a drug? you wouldn't tell me your just like sauce. You wouldnt tell me about girls and their problems and sauce wants to be a virgin forever. GIRLS. that was fun. p.s- i pushed submit but it said a invalid spam protection code. fuuuunny.
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Reviewed By: Sexy Blue Eyes/ eric On: August 15, 2006 22:37 CDT
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Ha now i can review you on mediaminor and bother you even more. Nice chap I was looking for different but I found your story. I DID NOT GIVE SAUCE MONO! IF I DID I WOULD CRY. BECAUSE THAT MEANS I'LL DIE She has been sick lately so watch over her for me okay? Cant wait for next chap.
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Title: this is not yours!!!!
Reviewed By: Linw [MediaMiner Member] On: June 07, 2006 10:16 CDT
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this fiction belongs to a other author!!! i read it 1 year back!!! so i would take it off the site. and set a appology to the author on the site.
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Reviewed By: whatserface On: March 23, 2006 15:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a very original idea, I like it, but the one below me is right, you do need some work on your spelling and grammar. It takes away from the story if read for too long and then all people begin to look at are the mistakes. You can see that reflected in my enjoyment factor, because the bad grammar distracted me. Overall, however, it's quite good and I think it could be more awesome.
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Reviewed By: Blissfulrain [MediaMiner Member] On: November 18, 2005 20:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
You need to work on your spelling and grammer a little more. These mistakes can ruin a story if they make it too hard to understand what is being said. That's the only thing that needs work on this fic. The story is really origanal and it would get a 10 in enjoyment if it weren't for the grammer mistakes. Keep writing and I'll try to keep reading.
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Reviewed By: it's me na na j On: November 14, 2005 16:37 CST
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>Razberry<
Well since i wrote this i guess i can review it. Clearly this is good but it lacks in some areas. But i need to know from the readers.
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